These 2 have been applied to my edit buffer
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[mailto:ietf-bounces(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org]On Behalf Of
Harald Tveit Alvestrand
Sent: Friday, January 21, 2005 15:46
To: ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
Subject: Legal review 4: Minor editorial
Editorial Comments from Jorge:
4., 3rd paragraph below bulleted list: The 2-year term rule
does not apply
during the initial terms. Thus, this paragraph should start
out saying
"Subject to paragraph 2 of Section 4.2, appointed members...."
5.5: I think that the 2nd sentence is not clear, as it uses
the technical
accounting term "debited" in a way that doesn't exactly say
what I think
it's supposed to. I would rewrite it as follows: "Funds in
IASA accounts
shall be used solely to support IETF activities and for no
other purposes."
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