Thanks. SO this is what I now have in my edit buffer:
<t>
The IASA is responsible for managing all IPR,
including but not limited to trademarks, domain names,
and copyrights, that belong to the IETF.
It is responsible for undertaking any and all required
actions on behalf of the IETF to obtain, protect and
manage the rights that the IETF needs to carry out
its work.
</t>
Bert
-----Original Message-----
From: ietf-bounces(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
[mailto:ietf-bounces(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org]On Behalf Of
Contreras, Jorge
Sent: Monday, January 31, 2005 19:01
To: Harald Tveit Alvestrand; ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
Subject: RE: Perhaps clarify: #825 - IASA responsibilities
regarding IPR
I suggest we change the text in section 3 from:
The IASA is responsible for undertaking any and all
required actions
that involve trademarks on behalf of the IETF.
to:
The IASA is responsible for managing all IPR, including but not
limited to trademarks, domain names, and copyrights, that belongs
to the IETF. It is responsible for undertaking any and
all required actions on behalf of the IETF to obtain, protect and
manage the rights that the IETF needs to carry out its work.
I'm sure Jorge could phrase it better..... but I think the meaning
is clear.
That looks good. In line 2, "belongs" should be "belong",
but otherwise I don't have any other improvements.
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