Jonathan,
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-sip-ice-option-tag-02
Reviewer: David Black
Review Date: 11 August 2007
IETF LC End Date: 16 August 2007
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.
Comments:
This short draft defines a couple of SIP tags for ICE. It's
in good shape. The only things I found are very minor:
The "Unfortunately," word at the beginning of Section 3.1 should
probably be removed.
idnits 2.04.12 found an outdated reference:
== Outdated reference: A later version (-17) exists of
draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-13
Thanks,
--David
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