I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-freed-sieve-date-index-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2008-05-23
IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-28
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication as a draft standard.
I have a few minor comments which I consider optional to address.
Comments:
Section 4:
Does it make sense to add a reference for ":is" and "i;ascii-casemap"?
Can you mention the reason that the date test can only apply to one
header field at a time?
Last paragraph, last sentence: "... the last one that appears should
be used."
Is that a normative SHOULD?
Section 4.1, time-zone syntax:
I assume the 4 digits are hhmm, as mentioned later in the discussion
of default time zone. It might help to explicitly state that in this
section.
Section 6.1, section title:
Section title is "Examples", but I only see one example :-)
Thanks!
Ben.
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