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Re: Review of draft-ietf-idnabis-tables

2009-11-24 11:46:49
This is taken care of in upcoming version (-08) of the document.

   Patrik

On 17 okt 2009, at 17.50, Bernard Aboba wrote:

I reviewed draft-ietf-idnabis-tables-07.    My comments are enclosed below. 



Technical



Section 5.1



  IANA is to keep a list of the derived property for the versions of

  Unicode that is released after (and including) version 5.1.  The

  derived property value is to be calculated according to the

  specifications in sections Section 2 and Section 3 and not by copying

  the non-normative table found in Appendix B.  



[BA] This seems to imply that IANA will do the calculation itself,  rather

Than just registering the results of a calculation made by someone else.  

Is that correct? 



Editorial



Section 1



 For example, a

  character can have its Unicode General_Category value change from So

  to Sm, or from Lo to Ll, without affecting the algorithm results.

  Moreover, even if such changes were to result, the BackwardCompatible

  list (Section 2.7) can be adjusted to ensure the stability of the

  results.



[BA] Lo and L1 are not defined until the next section.  Would it make sense
to define these terms earlier on? 



  Some code points need to be allowed in exceptional circumstances, but

  should be excluded in all other cases; these rules are also described

  in other documents.  The most notable of these are the the Join



[BA] "the the" -> "the"



Section 5.1



     in sections Section 2 and Section 3



[BA] Should this be "Sections 2 and 3"?

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