Paragraph 3 of section 4 says:
Because this cipher suite is equivalent to an empty
"renegotiation_info" extension, only renegotiation_info" may be used
rehandshakes.
Leaving aside the incorrect punctuation, this doesn't make any sense to me.
In section 5, suggest replacing all occurrences of the word "draft" with the
word "specification".
In section 6.2, s/NOT allow clients who do not offer the
"renegotiation_info" extension/NOT allow clients which do not offer the
"renegotiation_info" extension/.
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