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Document: draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2010-4-18
IESG Telechat date: 2010-4-22
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have
some nits
Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 7 what you are registering is a media subtype and not a
media type. The media type is application. So "defines a new media type"
should be "defines a new media subtype" and "Registration of media type"
should be "Registration of media subtype".
2. The document defines new object identifiers like
id-ct-KP-aKeyPackage and AsymmetricKeyPackageModuleV1. Where is the list of
these identifiers kept and how do you update this list in order to guarantee
the uniqueness of these identifiers.
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