I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .
Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
fixed before publication.
This draft describes the addition of source routing and route tracing to HIP.
It is proposed for Experimental status, which seems appropriate, especially for
source routing.
The draft's in good shape - idnits 2.12.04 found a few minor nits:
== You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice from
12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009. (See
http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)
-> Copy the correct boilerplate.
== Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of
draft-ietf-hip-bone-04
== Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of
draft-ietf-p2psip-base-07
-> These are only worth updating if a new version of the draft is needed for
other reasons.
Thanks,
--David
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