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Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-via-01

2010-06-15 10:31:44
Hi David,

On 06/12/2010 06:22 AM, david(_dot_)black(_at_)emc(_dot_)com wrote:
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

This draft describes the addition of source routing and route tracing
to HIP.  It is proposed for Experimental status, which seems
appropriate, especially for source routing.

The draft's in good shape - idnits 2.12.04 found a few minor nits:

== You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice
from 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009.  (See
 http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)

-> Copy the correct boilerplate.

== Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-ietf-hip-bone-04

== Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of draft-ietf-p2psip-base-07

-> These are only worth updating if a new version of the draft is
needed for other reasons.

Thanks for the review! All these nits should be fixed when we run the draft through the xml2rfc next time.


Cheers,
Ari
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