I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-uni-nni-02
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2010-12-21
IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-23
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as in informational RFC. I have a
small number of editorial comments that I think could further improve the draft
if there is another round of editing.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- Section 1, 1st paragraph:
I suggest moving the expansion of MPLS-TP TP the first mention in the body of
the draft.
-- Section 1.1, 1st paragraph:
More conventional in what context? Useful for what purpose?
-- Section 1.2, definition of UNI-N
I suggest expanding PE in the definition.
-- Figures 1 and 2:
Is the meaning of the various line types described elsewhere? If so, a
statement to that effect with a reference would be helpful.
-- Figure 2:
I suggest expanding CP somewhere.
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