On Mar 4, 2011, at 6:01 AM, Roni Even wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.
Document: draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2011–3–4
IETF LC End Date: 2011–3–18
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end
connection is TCP while in other places like section 3, 4th paragraph you
mention that UDP is used to tunnel packet end to end. So what are the TCP
connections used for?
section 3 talks about the use of UDP encapsulation for end host's data packets.
section 5 and section 6.1 refer to TCP connections used by user applications
running on end hosts.
Nits/editorial comments:
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