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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dual-stack-lite-07
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2011-4-10
IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-12
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as standard track RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 8.3 NAT-44 appears without any reference or terminology
expansion.
2. In section 8.5 "liefetime" should be "lifetime"
3. I am not sure what the recommendation in section 8.5 is. Is keep
alive required or using PCP is recommended.
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