Hi Barry,
Thanks VERY VERY much for your detailed review. I have accepted ALL of
your changes modulo one. And to your comment:
On 4/13/11 1:30 AM, Barry Leiba wrote:
COMMENT
Because you just mentioned "key", meaning "cryptographic key", in the
previous paragraph, it needs to be clear that these are not those.
I've changed the term key to TZ name, as suggested by Tony Finch.
OLD
actually is, or in case of historical corrections, was.
NEW
actually is (or, in case of historical corrections, was).
This is the one I would prefer to leave alone. I try my best to avoid
parentheticals in formal work.
Again, thanks for your review!
Eliot
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