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Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-options-registry-01.txt> (IANA Registry for Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) Options) to Proposed Standard

2011-04-29 11:04:49
Magnus,

29.04.2011 11:47, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
Hi Mykyta,

Thanks for the review.

See inline for response.

Mykyta Yevstifeyev skrev 2011-04-28 19:22:
Hello,

Some comments on this document, currently in Last Call.

Network Working Group                                      M. Westerlund
Internet-Draft                                                  Ericsson
Updates: 5245 (if approved)                                   C. Perkins
Intended status: Standards Track                   University of Glasgow
Expires: September 29, 2011                               March 28, 2011
I don't see why the intended status for this document is Standards
Track.  Wouldn't Informational be enough?  Could you please justify why
have you chosen it?
I don't think we have put much thought into it. But one reason I can
think of is to have it on the same maturity level as the ICE
specification itself. Thus enabling a merge of this registry into an
update of RFC 5245 without forcing it to be recycled as proposed.
This is a good reason, so I'll agree with it.
Your registry description does not mention what is the precise name of
the registry.  While everybody understands that is sands for ICE
options, it would be useful to give IANA distinctive guidelines on its
name (this is also required in RFC5226, Section 4.2, 1) in the list;
http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5226#section-4.2).

Yes, I agree that it should be included in Section 3.1 of our document
rather than only in the title which says "Interactive Connectivity
Establishment (ICE) Options"
Agreed on this.  Such name is fine, IMO.
 From RFC 5226, also Section 4.2:

  5) Initial assignments and reservations.  Clear instructions
          should be provided to identify any initial assignments or
          registrations.  In addition, any ranges that are to be reserved
  for "Private Use", "Reserved", "Unassigned", etc. should be
          clearly indicated.
Are there any initial assignments?  Your document mentions one option;
shouldn't it be registered?
No, because when draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-ecn gets published that will
actually do the registration. As that document isn't approved yet and in
fact still not WG last called this registry will first be created empty
and then populated.
So you should have mentioned this in the draft as well.
  A registration request MUST include the following information:

    [ . . . ]
Shall this be mentioned as a registration template?
It isn't written as one. It is a list of what needs to be present in the
registration. And I think a template would be more focused on what needs
to the general categories rather than the information. Thus I don't want
this as registration template.
OK, this matter is not very important.
o  Email and Address of the Contact person
I think you should add the name of the contact person to the name of
this field as well.
As the two first bullets are:

    o  Name of contact person for the registration

    o  Email and Address of the Contact person

I don't quite understand your comment. Do you want us to merge the two
entries? This as the contact persons will need to provide name, email
and address. I am fine with merging them and this is likely a slight
improvement.
No, I didn't propose to merge it. I just proposed to rename this field as "Name, Email and Addresses of the Contact Person".

Thanks for taking time to response to my comments.

Mykyta Yevstifeyev
Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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