Thanks. I will take care of nits 2 & 3 in the next update. Will be ignoring nit
#1, as per Adrian's comment.
Nitin
On 5/24/11 1:11 AM, "Roni Even" <ron(_dot_)even(_dot_)tlv(_at_)gmail(_dot_)com>
wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2011-5-24
IETF LC End Date: 2011-5-30
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Need to expand LDP when first mentioned.
2. Section 3.3.1.1 "The multipath data sub-TLV includes information
multipath information" delete the first information.
3. In section 3.3.1.2 "When the Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV in sent
in the echo response" should be is sent.
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