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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2012-1-1
IETF LC End Date: 2012-1-4
IESG Telechat date: 2012-1-5
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 3.2 "Type and VSS Information -- see Section 35" should
be 3.5
2. In section 3.3 "This sub-option only only"
3. In 3.5 last bullet not clear - "and the length of the MUST be 1."
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