On 2012-02-11 01:48, The IESG wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Reliable Multicast Transport WG
(rmt) to consider the following document:
- 'FLUTE - File Delivery over Unidirectional Transport'
<draft-ietf-rmt-flute-revised-13.txt> as a Proposed Standard
The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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Here are a few comments, mainly of editorial nature:
Below my review notes; just mechanical checks, and some checks on the
relation to HTTP header fields...:
Section 3:
"File name (usually, this can be concluded from the URI). In the above
example: "file.txt"."
...or the Content-Disposition header field (RFC 6266).
"File type, expressed as MIME media type. In the above example:
"text/plain"."
s/MIME media type/internet media type/
3.4.2:
"Where the MD5 message digest is described, the attribute "Content-MD5"
MUST be used for the purpose as defined in [RFC2616]."
Note that Content-MD5 is gone from HTTPbis.
XML-Schema: I believe the spec should state what to do with invalid
input. Are there extension points (like ignoring unknown elements in
extension namespaces)?
"It is RECOMMENDED that the new attributes applied in the FDT are in the
format of MIME fields and are either defined in the HTTP/1.1
specification [RFC2616] or another well-known specification."
As this is a normative requirement it needs to be clarified what header
fields are used? HTTP? MIME?
Also, well-known is irrelevant, we have a registry for header fields.
8.1:
Actually, what's requested is a URN for the XML namespace
("urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:fdt"). That's fine; I don't think the XML
schema needs to be registered. Otherwise, see
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3688#section-3.2>.
8.2:
Has the media type registration been reviewed on ietf-types?
8.3:
You need to define the IANA procedure (see RFC 5226).
Appendix B:
The example contains a schemaLocation with a relative (URI) reference
("ietf-flute-fdt.xsd"). That's misleading, right?
References:
Please cite W3C spec with their full details, like this:
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/rfc2629xslt/w3c-references.html#ref-REC-xmlschema-1-20010502>
Speaking of which; shouldn't you cite the Second Edition?
[RMT-SIMPLE-AUTH]: this should be cited using the default ID style, in
which case xml2rfc will add the helpful "work-in-progress" label
Should RFC2357 be in the references?
You may want to cite RFC3986 (URI).
Formatting: I note that in-document links haven't been generated using
xml2rfc's linking features; this way references to section numbers can
break easily. I did not check those.
Best regards, Julian
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