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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-06-14
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- 2.1, 1st paragraph:
Please expand RSVP-TE on first mention.
-- 2.1, 2nd paragraph: "...can take place independent from..."
s/independent/independently
-- 2.2, paragraph 5: "... definition of the Association ID, which is (quoting
[RFC4872]):"
The quoted text this refers to is more of a description of use than a
definition.