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RE: Last Call: <draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07.txt> (Common requirements for Carrier Grade NATs (CGNs)) to Best Current Practice

2012-07-06 11:51:46
I have a comment about this document related to some discussions that I've had 
with a number of ADs and WG chairs around the formation and charter of Sunset4 
to determine what is and is not in scope for that WG.

For a while both BEHAVE and Sunset4 had this document in their milestones, 
which clearly won't work. Therefore the distinction made between work to be 
done in BEHAVE and SUNSET4 was that BEHAVE was to focus more generically on the 
concept of NAT and the things necessary to make all flavors of it work, such 
that BEHAVE outputs would equally apply to NAT444, NAT64, DSLite, etc. By 
contrast, Sunset4 was supposed to focus more narrowly on IPv4-only items. The 
BEHAVE chairs were represented in these discussions, and they believed that 
this document was in keeping with this distinction.
In the document's introduction, for example, that generic nature is implied:
  "It is not an IETF endorsement
   of CGN or a real specification for CGN, but rather just a minimal set
   of requirements that will increase the likelihood of applications
   working across CGNs."

However, this document states in section 2:
  "Note also that the CGN described in this document is IPv4-only.
   IPv6 address translation is not considered."
I see that this is a new change to the -07 version, so I hate to rehash the 
discussion, but I think that this statement should be clearer.
In reading the document, I don't believe that the intent was to limit it to 
being a discussion of NAT44[4], but that could be the way that this statement 
is interpreted. The distinction I might make to clarify is that since the 
document is talking about behaviors that are necessary to make IPv4 
address-sharing work, it's specific to the IPv4 side of what could well be a 
dual-stack NAT, but it's not limited to simply NAT44[4].

I'm not advocating pulling this document back so that it can go to the "right" 
working group, because I don't think that'll actually add any value to the 
document and I'm not a fan of process for process's sake. My concern is really 
more about content and naming- if it is truly a IPv4-only NAT (NAT44 or NAT444) 
requirements doc rather than a more generic CGN requirements doc, it should be 
named to reflect that. If it's meant to be a generic LSN requirements doc, the 
authors should make the appropriate changes to keep it generic.

Thanks,

Wes George, at least partially wearing my Sunset4 chair hat



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Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07.txt> (Common
requirements for Carrier Grade NATs (CGNs)) to Best Current Practice


The IESG has received a request from the Behavior Engineering for
Hindrance Avoidance WG (behave) to consider the following document:
- 'Common requirements for Carrier Grade NATs (CGNs)'
  <draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07.txt> as Best Current Practice

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Abstract


   This document defines common requirements for Carrier-Grade NAT
   (CGN).  It updates RFC 4787.




The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-behave-lsn-
requirements/ballot/


The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:

   http://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1648/




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