On Nov 29, 2012, at 6:09 PM, Peter Yee <peter(_at_)akayla(_dot_)com> wrote:
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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Nov-29-2012
IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012
IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that
should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.]
All other corrections from the -13 review were accepted and the other
changes in the current version appear reasonable.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 4.2.1.8, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: bracket "Section 2.8.1" in
"(see" and ")" for readability.
[This is my same suggestion from the previous review. I won't mention it
again, I promise. :-) ]
Sorry we missed this before. I'll work with Martin to see that this is
addressed.
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Chuck Lever
chuck[dot]lever[at]oracle[dot]com