Hi Gayle,
On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble
<windy_1(_at_)skyhighway(_dot_)com> wrote:
Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one
sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity
4.1. Data Plane
RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or
which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames.
[Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM
frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or
require processing by the OAM plane.]]
Thanks for the praise!
I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the
word "identify" with the word "distinguish".
Donald
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