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2013-01-18 10:09:21
Here is Tom Nadeau's feedback, forwarded with permission:

Regards, Benoit

==============

Some general comments:

1. I did not find any discussion around use of configuration within OAM
   mechanisms. This is clearly something that is happening in groups
   like PWE3 and CCAMP. The motivation for this should be explained and
   documented to at least guide these efforts.

2. There is no real discussion around the security aspects of these tools. Should there be?

3. While the document provides a nice taxonomy of various OAM tools, it does not really discuss the techniques for using them. I do not expect anything in detail, but it is not obvious that many of these tools can be orchestrated to form a "toolset" that can be used to do multi-layer OAM functions for services such as carrier Ethernet over VPLS over MPLS, for example.

4. It might be useful to at least mention in the performance metrics section, a discussion around the accuracy of these tools and how it depends on scale, implementation and network configurations.


My detailed comments inline starting with TOM:

--Tom






   Expires: July 2013                                Nokia Siemens Networks
       E. Bellagamba
            Ericsson
       Y. Weingarten

     January 9, 2013

                                  An Overview of
            Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) Mechanisms
     draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08.txt


   Abstract

       Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) is a general term

       that refers to a toolset that can be used for fault detection and
       isolation, and for performance measurement. OAM mechanisms have been
       defined for various layers in the protocol stack, and are used
   with a
       variety of protocols.

       This document presents an overview of the OAM mechanisms that have
       been defined and are currently being defined by the IETF.

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   Table of Contents


       1. Introduction ................................................. 3
          1.1. The Building Blocks of OAM .............................. 3
          1.2. Forwarding Plane vs. Management Plane ................... 4
          1.3. The OAM toolsets ........................................ 4
          1.4. IETF OAM Documents ...................................... 6
          1.5. Non-IETF OAM Documents ................................. 10
       2. Basic Terminology ........................................... 12
          2.1. Abbreviations .......................................... 12
          2.2. Terminology used in OAM Standards ...................... 13
             2.2.1. General Terms ..................................... 13
             2.2.2. OAM Maintenance Entities .......................... 13
             2.2.3. OAM Maintenance Points ............................ 14
             2.2.4. Proactive and On-demand activation ................ 15
             2.2.5. Connectivity Verification and Continuity Checks ... 15
             2.2.6. Failures .......................................... 15
       3. OAM Tools ................................................... 16
          3.1. IP Ping and Traceroute ................................. 16
             3.1.1. Ping .............................................. 16
             3.1.2. Traceroute......................................... 16
          3.2. Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) ............... 17
             3.2.1. Overview .......................................... 17
             3.2.2. BFD Control ....................................... 17
             3.2.3. BFD Echo .......................................... 18
          3.3. MPLS OAM ............................................... 18
          3.4. MPLS-TP OAM ............................................ 19
             3.4.1. Overview .......................................... 19
             3.4.2. Generic Associated Channel ........................ 19
             3.4.3. MPLS-TP OAM Toolset ............................... 20
                3.4.3.1. Continuity Check and Connectivity Verification 20


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                3.4.3.2. Route Tracing ................................ 21
                3.4.3.3. Lock Instruct ................................ 21
                3.4.3.4. Lock Reporting ............................... 21
                3.4.3.5. Alarm Reporting .............................. 21
                3.4.3.6. Remote Defect Indication ..................... 22
                3.4.3.7. Client Failure Indication .................... 22
                3.4.3.8. Packet Loss Measurement (LM) ................. 22
                3.4.3.9. Packet Delay Measurement (DM) ................ 22
          3.5. PWE3 OAM ............................................... 23
             3.5.1. PWE3 OAM using Virtual Circuit Connectivity
   Verification
             (VCCV) ................................................... 23
             3.5.2. PWE3 OAM using G-ACh .............................. 24
          3.6. OWAMP and TWAMP......................................... 24
             3.6.1. Overview .......................................... 24
             3.6.2. Control and Test Protocols ........................ 24
             3.6.3. OWAMP ............................................. 25
             3.6.4. TWAMP ............................................. 26
          3.7. Summary of OAM Functions ............................... 26
       4. Security Considerations ..................................... 27
       5. IANA Considerations ......................................... 27
       6. Acknowledgments ............................................. 27
       7. References .................................................. 28
          7.1. Normative References ................................... 28
          7.2. Informative References ................................. 31

   1. Introduction

       OAM is a general term that refers to a toolset for detecting,
       isolating and reporting connection failures and performance
       degradation.


       This document summarizes the OAM tools and mechanisms defined in the
       IETF.

       The term OAM in this document refers to Operations, Administration
       and Maintenance [OAM-Def], focusing on the forwarding plane of OAM.
       Hence, management aspects are outside the scope of this document.


TOM: This is a curious sentence to me since to me, OAM is management, or a subset of it. Also, if you look at the referenced documents, there are many indirect references to MIBs, Netconf, etc... making this sentence further confusing. It might be helpful to explain more clearly that the authors here intended to not cover those things explicitly rather than grouping them arbitrarily under the definition of "management aspects" Further, to clarify, it might be useful to expand on what "forwarding plane" is here just to be clear. That is, is this "in band" or "out-of band" or both? Some of the tools referred to here also are part of the control AND data planes.

   1.1. The Building Blocks of OAM

       An OAM protocol is run in the context of a Maintenance Domain,
       consisting of two or more nodes that run the OAM protocol, referred
       to as Maintenance Points (MP).

       This subsection provides a brief summary of the common tools used by
       OAM protocols. An OAM protocol typically supports one or more of the
       tools described below.


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       o Continuity Checking (CC):
          Used for verifying the liveness of a connection between two MPs.

       o Connectivity Verification (CV):
          Allows an MP to check whether it is connected to a peer MP,
   and to
          verify that messages from the peer MP are received through the
          expected path.

       o Path Discovery / Fault Localization:
          An MP uses this mechanism to trace the route to a peer MP, i.e.,
          to identify the nodes along the path to the peer MP. When a
          connection fails, this mechanism also allows the MP to detect the
          location of the failure.


TOM: The definition calls this "path discovery" but then talks about tracing routes. A better way of describing this in the paragraph would be that there I a use of path tracing in order to discover (or re-discover) paths that have been changed, created or destroyed.


       o Performance Monitoring:
          Consists of 3 main functions

            o Loss Measurement (LM) - monitors the packet loss rate of a
              connection.

            o Delay Measurement (DM) - monitors the delay and delay
              variation between MPs.

            o Throughput measurement - monitors the throughput of a
              connection.


TOM: Along with the discussion above around path trace/discovery, it is imperative that paths be discovered (one way or another) in order to successfully d performance monitoring on those paths.

   1.2. Forwarding Plane vs. Management Plane

       While the OAM tools may, and quite often do, work in conjunction
   with
       a control-plane or management plane, they are usually defined to be
       independent of the control-plane.  The OAM tools communicate
   with the
       management plane to raise alarms, and often the on-demand tools may
       be activated by the management, e.g. to locate and localize
   problems.

       The considerations of the control-plane maintenance tools or the
       functionality of the management-plane are out of scope for this
       document, which will concentrate on presenting the forwarding-plane
       tools that are used for OAM.


TOM: What about the data plane? For example, the GACH OAM type is such an example. VCCV also operates within the data plane after its configuration capabilities have been signaled. It should also be mentioned that it is imperative that when required, OAM tools are capable of testing the actual data plane in as much accuracy as possible, but that they all should note how accurate. Not all OAM tools are created equal.


   1.3. The OAM toolsets

       This memo provides an overview of the different sets of OAM
       mechanisms defined by the IETF. It is intended for those with little
       or no familiarity with the described mechanisms. The set of OAM
       mechanisms described in this memo are applicable to IP unicast,
   MPLS,
       pseudowires, and MPLS for the transport environment (MPLS-TP). While
       OAM mechanisms that are applicable to other technologies exist, they


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       are beyond the scope of this memo. This document focuses on IETF
       documents that have been published as RFCs, while other ongoing OAM-
       related work is outside the scope.

       The IETF has defined OAM protocols and mechanisms in several
       different fronts:

       o IP Ping and Traceroute:
          Ping is a very simple and common application for failure
   diagnosis


TOM: I am not sure the term "common" is necessary.

          that uses ICMP Echo requests, as defined in [ICMPv4], and
          [ICMPv6].
          Traceroute ([TCPIP-Tools], [NetTools]) is an application that
          allows users to trace the path between an IP source and an IP
          destination, i.e., to identify the nodes along the path.

       o BFD:
          Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) is defined in [BFD] as a
          framework for a lightweight generic OAM mechanism.  The intention
          is to define a base mechanism that can be used with various
          encapsulation types, network environments, and in various medium
          types.

       o MPLS OAM:
          MPLS LSP Ping, as defined in [MPLS-OAM], [MPLS-OAM-FW] and [LSP-
          Ping], is an OAM mechanism for point to point MPLS LSPs. It
          includes two main functions: Ping and Traceroute.

       o MPLS-TP OAM:
          MPLS-TP OAM is defined in a set of RFCs. The OAM requirements for
          MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) are defined in [MPLS-TP-OAM].
          Each of the tools in the OAM toolset is defined in its own
   RFC, as
          specified in Section 1.4.

       o PWE3 OAM:
          The PWE3 OAM architecture defines control channels that support
          the use of existing IETF OAM tools to be used for a pseudowire
          (PW).  The control channels that are defined in [VCCV] and [PW-G-
          ACH] may be used in conjunction with ICMP Ping, LSP Ping, and BFD
          to perform CC and CV functionality.  In addition the channels
          support use of any of the MPLS-TP based OAM tools for completing
          their respective OAM functionality for a PW.

       o OWAMP and TWAMP:
          The One Way Active Measurement Protocol (OWAMP) and the Two Way
          Active Measurement Protocols (TWAMP) are two protocols defined in
          the IP Performance Metrics (IPPM) working group in the IETF.
   These
          protocols allow delay and packet loss measurement in IP networks.


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       This document summarizes the OAM mechanisms defined by the IETF. We
       first present a comparison of the terminology used in various OAM
       standards, and then summarize the OAM functions that each OAM
       standard provides.

   1.4. IETF OAM Documents

       Table 1 summarizes the IETF OAM related RFCs discussed in this
       document.

       The table includes a "Type" column, specifying the nature of each of
       the listed documents:

       o Tool: documents that define an OAM tool or mechanism.

       o Prof.: documents that define a profile or a variant for an OAM
          tool that is defined in other documents.

       o Inf.: documents that define an infrastructure that is used by OAM
          tools.

       o Misc.: other OAM related documents, e.g., OAM requirement and
          framework documents.

     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Title  |Type | RFC      |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |IP Ping and| Internet Control Message Protocol  |Tool | RFC 792  |
|Traceroute | [ICMPv4] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Internet Control Message Protocol  |Tool | RFC 4443 |
| | (ICMPv6) for the Internet Protocol | | | | | Version 6 (IPv6) Specification | | | | | [ICMPv6] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A Primer On Internet and TCP/IP  |Tool | RFC 2151 |
| | Tools and Utilities [TCPIP-Tools] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | FYI on a Network Management Tool |Tool | RFC 1147 |
| | Catalog: Tools for Monitoring and | | | | | Debugging TCP/IP Internets and | | | | | Interconnected Devices [NetTools] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Extended ICMP to Support Multi-Part  |Tool | RFC
   4884 |


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| | Messages [ICMP-MP] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | ICMP Extensions for Multiprotocol  |Tool | RFC 4950 |
| | Label Switching [ICMP-Ext] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Extending ICMP for Interface and |Tool | RFC 5837 |
| | Next-Hop Identification [ICMP-Int] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |BFD        | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Tool | RFC 5880 |
| | [BFD] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Prof.| RFC 5881 |
| | (BFD) for IPv4 and IPv6 (Single Hop) | | | | | [BFD-IP] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Generic Application of Bidirectional |Misc.| RFC
   5882 |
| | Forwarding Detection [BFD-Gen] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Prof.| RFC 5883 |
| | (BFD) for Multihop Paths [BFD-Multi] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Prof.| RFC 5884 |
| | for MPLS Label Switched Paths (LSPs) | | | | | [BFD-LSP] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Prof.| RFC 5885 |
| | for the Pseudowire Virtual Circuit | | | | | Connectivity Verification (VCCV) | | | | | [BFD-VCCV] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |MPLS OAM   | Operations and Management (OAM)  |Misc.| RFC 4377 |
| | Requirements for Multi-Protocol Label| | | | | Switched (MPLS) Networks [MPLS-OAM] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A Framework for Multi-Protocol |Misc.| RFC 4378 |
| | Label Switching (MPLS) Operations | | | | | and Management (OAM) [MPLS-OAM-FW] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Detecting Multi-Protocol Label |Tool | RFC 4379 |
| | Switched (MPLS) Data Plane Failures | | | | | [LSP-Ping] | | |


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       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Operations and Management (OAM)  |Misc.| RFC 4687 |
| | Requirements for Point-to-Multipoint | | | | | MPLS Networks [MPLS-P2MP] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |MPLS-TP    | Requirements for OAM in MPLS-TP  |Misc.| RFC 5860 |
|OAM | [MPLS-TP-OAM] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | MPLS Generic Associated Channel  |Inf. | RFC 5586 |
| | [G-ACh] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | MPLS-TP OAM Framework  |Misc.| RFC 6371 |
| | [TP-OAM-FW] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Proactive Connectivity Verification, |Tool | RFC
   6428 |
| | Continuity Check, and Remote Defect | | | | | Indication for the MPLS Transport | | | | | Profile [TP-CC-CV] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | MPLS On-Demand Connectivity  |Tool | RFC 6426 |
| | Verification and Route Tracing | | | | | [OnDemand-CV] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | MPLS Fault Management Operations,  |Tool | RFC 6427 |
| | Administration, and Maintenance (OAM)| | | | | [TP-Fault] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | MPLS Transport Profile Lock Instruct |Tool | RFC
   6435 |
| | and Loopback Functions [Lock-Loop] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Packet Loss and Delay Measurement for|Tool | RFC
   6374 |
| | MPLS Networks [MPLS-LM-DM] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A Packet Loss and Delay Measurement  |Prof.| RFC
   6375 |
| | Profile for MPLS-Based Transport | | | | | Networks [TP-LM-DM] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |PWE3 OAM   | Pseudowire Virtual Circuit |Inf. | RFC 5085 |
| | Connectivity Verification (VCCV): | | | | | A Control Channel for Pseudowires | | | | | [VCCV] | | |


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       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Bidirectional Forwarding Detection |Prof.| RFC 5885 |
| | for the Pseudowire Virtual Circuit | | | | | Connectivity Verification (VCCV) | | | | | [BFD-VCCV] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Using the Generic Associated Channel |Inf. | RFC
   6423 |
| | Label for Pseudowire in the MPLS | | | | | Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) | | | | | [PW-G-ACh] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Pseudowire (PW) Operations,  |Misc.| RFC 6310 |
| | Administration, and Maintenance (OAM)| | | | | Message Mapping [PW-Map] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |OWAMP and  | A One-way Active Measurement Protocol|Tool | RFC
   4656 |
|TWAMP | [OWAMP] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol|Tool | RFC
   5357 |
| | [TWAMP] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | Framework for IP Performance Metrics |Misc.| RFC
   2330 |
| | [IPPM-FW] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | IPPM Metrics for Measuring |Misc.| RFC 2678 |
| | Connectivity [IPPM-Con] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A One-way Delay Metric for IPPM  |Misc.| RFC 2679 |
| | [IPPM-1DM] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A One-way Packet Loss Metric for IPPM|Misc.| RFC
   2680 |
| | [IPPM-1LM] | | |
       | +--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
       |           | A Round-trip Delay Metric for IPPM |Misc.| RFC 2681 |
| | [IPPM-2DM] | | |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+-----+----------+
                     Table 1 Summary of IETF OAM Related RFCs







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   1.5. Non-IETF OAM Documents

       In addition to the OAM mechanisms defined by the IETF, the IEEE and
       ITU-T have also defined various OAM mechanisms that focus on
       Ethernet, and various other transport network environments. These
       various mechanisms, defined by the three standard organizations, are
       often tightly coupled, and have had a mutual effect on each other.
       The ITU-T and IETF have both defined OAM mechanisms for MPLS LSPs,
       [ITU-T-Y1711] and [LSP-Ping]. The following OAM standards by the
   IEEE
       and ITU-T are to some extent linked to IETF OAM mechanisms listed
       above and are mentioned here only as reference material:

       o OAM mechanisms for Ethernet based networks have been defined by
          both the ITU-T in [ITU-T-Y1731], and by the IEEE in
   [IEEE802.1ag].
          The IEEE 802.3 standard defines OAM for one-hop Ethernet links
          [IEEE802.3ah].

       o The ITU-T has defined OAM for MPLS LSPs in [ITU-T-Y1711], and
          MPLS-TP OAM in [ITU-G8113.1] and [ITU-G8113.2].

       Table 2 summarizes the OAM standards mentioned in this document.
   This
       document focuses on IETF OAM standards, but these non-IETF standards
       are referenced where relevant.

     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |           | Title  |Standard/Draft |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |ITU-T      | Operation & Maintenance mechanism    | ITU-T Y.1711  |
       |MPLS OAM   | for MPLS networks [ITU-T-Y1711]      |               |
       | +--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |           | Assignment of the 'OAM Alert Label'  | RFC 3429      |
       |           | for Multiprotocol Label Switching    |               |
       |           | Architecture (MPLS) Operation and    |               |
       |           | Maintenance (OAM) Functions          |               |
       |           | [OAM-Label]                          |               |
       |           |                                      |               |
       |           |  Note: although this is an IETF      |               |
       |           |  document, it is listed as one of the|               |
       |           |  non-IETF OAM standards, since it    |               |
       |           |  was defined as a complementary part |               |
       |           |  of ITU-T Y.1711.                    |               |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |ITU-T      | Operations, administration and |ITU-T G.8113.2 |
       |MPLS-TP OAM| Maintenance mechanisms for MPLS-TP   |               |


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       |           | networks using the tools defined for |               |
       |           | MPLS [ITU-G8113.2]                   |               |
       |           |                                      |               |
       |           |  Note: this document describes the   |               |
       |           |  OAM toolset defined by the IETF for |               |
       |           |  MPLS-TP, whereas ITU-T G.8113.1     |               |
       |           |  describes the OAM toolset defined   |               |
       |           |  by the ITU-T.                       |               |
       | +--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |           | Operations, Administration and |ITU-T G.8113.1 |
       |           | Maintenance mechanism for MPLS-TP in |               |
       |           | Packet Transport Network (PTN)       |               |
       | +--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |           | Allocation of a Generic Associated   | RFC 6671      |
       |           | Channel Type for ITU-T MPLS Transport|               |
       |           | Profile Operation, Maintenance, and  |               |
       |           | Administration (MPLS-TP OAM)         |               |
       |           | [ITU-T-CT]                           |               |
       |           |                                      |               |
       |           |  Note: although this is an IETF      |               |
       |           |  document, it is listed as one of the|               |
       |           |  non-IETF OAM standards, since it    |               |
       |           |  was defined as a complementary part |               |
       |           |  of ITU-T G.8113.1.                  |               |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |ITU-T      | OAM Functions and Mechanisms for |[ITU-T-Y1731]  |
       |Ethernet   | Ethernet-based Networks              |               |
       |OAM        |                                      |               |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |IEEE       | Connectivity Fault Management        | IEEE 802.1ag  |
       |CFM        | [IEEE802.1ag]                        |               |
       |           |                                      |               |
       |           |  Note: CFM was originally published  |               |
       |           |  as IEEE 802.1ag, but is now         |               |
       |           |  incorporated in the 802.1Q standard.|               |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
       |IEEE       | Media Access Control Parameters,     | IEEE 802.3ah  |
       |802.3      | Physical Layers, and Management      |               |
       |link level | Parameters for Subscriber Access     |               |
       |OAM        | Networks [IEEE802.3ah]               |               |
       |           |                                      |               |


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       |           |  Note: link level OAM was originally |               |
       |           |  defined in IEEE 802.3ah, and is now |               |
       |           |  incorporated in the 802.3 standard. |               |
     +-----------+--------------------------------------+---------------+
             Table 2 Non-IETF OAM Standards Mentioned in this Document

   2. Basic Terminology

   2.1. Abbreviations

       ACH    Associated Channel Header

       AIS    Alarm Indication Signal

       BFD    Bidirectional Forwarding Detection

       CC     Continuity Check

       CV     Connectivity Verification

       DM     Delay Measurement

       FEC    Forwarding Equivalence Class

       GAL    Generic Associated Label

       ICMP   Internet Control Message Protocol

       LDP    Label Distribution Protocol

       LM     Loss Measurement

       LSP    Label Switched Path

       ME     Maintenance Entity

       MEG    Maintenance Entity Group

       MEP    MEG End Point

       MIP    MEG Intermediate Point

       MP     Maintenance Point

       MPLS   Multiprotocol Label Switching



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       MPLS-TP MPLS Transport Profile

       MTU    Maximum Transmission Unit

       OAM    Operations, Administration, and Maintenance

       PW     Pseudowire

       PWE3   Pseudowire Emulation Edge-to-Edge

       RDI    Remote Defect Indication

       TTL    Time To Live

       VCCV   Virtual Circuit Connectivity Verification



TOM: Why is this section not at the top of this document, as is customary for RFCs?


   2.2. Terminology used in OAM Standards

   2.2.1. General Terms

       A wide variety of terms is used in various OAM standards. Each
   of the
       OAM standards listed in the reference section includes a section
   that
       defines terms relevant to that tool. A thesaurus of terminology for
       MPLS-TP terms is presented in [TP-Term], and provides a good summary
       of some of the OAM related terminology.

       This section presents a comparison of the terms used in various OAM
       standards, without fully quoting the definition of each term. For a
       formal definition of each term, refer to the references at the
   end of
       this document.

   2.2.2. OAM Maintenance Entities

       OAM tools are designed to monitor and manage a Maintenance Entity
       (ME).  An ME, as defined in [TP-OAM-FW], defines a relationship
       between two points of a transport path to which maintenance and
       monitoring operations apply.

       The following related terms are also quoted from [TP-OAM-FW]:

       o MEP: The two points that define a maintenance entity.

       o MEG: The collection of one or more MEs that belongs to the same
          transport path and that are maintained and monitored as a group
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       o MIP: In between MEPs, there are zero or more intermediate points,
          called Maintenance Entity Group Intermediate Points (MIPs).

       A pair of MEPs engaged in an ME are connected by a communication
       link, which may be one of several types of connection, e.g. a single
       physical connection, a set of physical connections, or a virtual
   link
       such as an MPLS LSP.

       The term Maintenance Entity (ME) is used in ITU-T Recommendations
       (e.g. [ITU-T-Y1731]), as well as in the MPLS-TP terminology
   ([TP-OAM-
       FW]). Various terms are used to refer to an ME. For example, BFD
   does
       not explicitly use a term that is equivalent to ME, but rather uses
       the term "session", referring to the relationship between two nodes
       using a BFD protocol. The MPLS LSP Ping ([LSP-Ping]) terminology
       simply uses the term "LSP" in this context.

       MPLS-TP has defined the terms ME and Maintenance Entity Group (MEG)
       in [TP-OAM-FW], similar to the terms defined by ITU-T.  A MEG allows
       the monitoring of a compound set of MEs, for example when monitoring
       a p2mp MEG that is considered to be the set of MEs between the root
       and each individual destination MEP.

   2.2.3. OAM Maintenance Points

       A Maintenance Point (MP) is a functional entity that is defined at a
       node in the network, and either initiates or reacts to OAM messages.
       A Maintenance End Point (MEP) is one of the end points of an ME, and
       can initiate OAM messages and respond to them. A Maintenance
       Intermediate Point (MIP) is an intermediate point between two MEPs,
       that does not generally initiate OAM frames (one exception to
   this is
       the use of AIS notifications), but is able to respond to OAM frames
       that are destined to it. A MIP in MPLS-TP identifies OAM packets
       destined to it by the value of the TTL field in the OAM packet. The
       term Maintenance Point is a general term for MEPs and MIPs.

       The 802.1ag defines a finer distinction between Up MPs and Down MPs.
       An MP is a bridge interface, that is monitored by an OAM protocol
       either in the direction facing the network, or in the direction
       facing the bridge. A Down MP is an MP that receives OAM packets
   from,
       and transmits them to the direction of the network. An Up MP
   receives
       OAM packets from, and transmits them to the direction of the
   bridging
       entity.

       MPLS-TP ([TP-OAM-FW]) uses a similar distinction on the placement of
       the MP - either at the ingress, egress, or forwarding function
   of the
       node (Down / Up MPs).  This placement is important for localization
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   2.2.4. Proactive and On-demand activation

       The different OAM tools may be used in one of two basic types of
       activation:

       o Proactive activation - indicates that the tool is activated on a
          continual basis periodically, where messages are sent between the
          two MEPs, and errors are detected when a certain number of
          expected messages are not received.

       o On-demand activation - indicates that the tool is activated
          "manually" to detect a specific anomaly.  In this activation a
          small number of OAM messages are sent by a MEP and the reply
          message is received.

   2.2.5. Connectivity Verification and Continuity Checks

       Two distinct classes of failure management functions are used in OAM
       protocols, connectivity verification and continuity checks. The
       distinction between these terms is defined in [MPLS-TP-OAM], and is
       used similarly in this document.

       Continuity checks are used to verify the liveness of a connection or
       a path between two MPs, and are typically sent proactively, though
       they can be invoked on-demand as well.

       A connectivity verification function allows an MP to check
   whether it
       is connected to a peer MP or not. This function also allows the
   MP to
       verify that messages from the peer MP are received through the
       correct path, thereby verifying not only that the two MPs are
       connected, but also that they are connected through the expected
       path. This allows detection of unexpected topology changes. A
       connectivity verification (CV) protocol typically uses a CV message,
       followed by a CV reply that is sent back to the originator. A CV
       function can be applied proactively or on-demand.

       Connectivity verification and continuity checks are considered
       complementary mechanisms, and are often used in conjunction with
   each
       other.

   2.2.6. Failures

       The terms Failure, Fault, and Defect are used interchangeably in the
       standards, referring to a malfunction that can be detected by a
       connectivity or a continuity check. In some standards, such as
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       other standards each of these terms refers to a different type of
       malfunction.

       The terminology used in IETF MPLS-TP OAM takes after the ITU-T,
   which
       distinguishes between these terms in [ITU-T-G.806]; The term Fault
       refers to an inability to perform a required action, e.g., an
       unsuccessful attempt to deliver a packet. The term Defect refers to
       an interruption in the normal operation, such as a consecutive
   period
       of time where no packets are delivered successfully. The term
   Failure
       refers to the termination of the required function. While a Defect
       typically refers to a limited period of time, a failure refers to a
       long period of time.

   3. OAM Tools

   3.1. IP Ping and Traceroute

   3.1.1. Ping

       Ping is a common network diagnosis application for IP networks that
       uses ICMP. The ICMP Echo request/reply exchange is a connectivity
       verification function for the Internet Protocol. The originator
       transmits an ICMP Echo request packet, and the receiver replies with
       an Echo reply. ICMP ping is defined in two variants, [ICMPv4] is
   used
       for IPv4, and [ICMPv6] is used for IPv6.

   3.1.2. Traceroute

       Traceroute ([TCPIP-Tools], [NetTools]) is an application that allows
       users to discover the path between an IP source and an IP
       destination. Traceroute sends a sequence of UDP packets to UDP port
       33434 at the destination. By default, Traceroute begins by sending
       three packets (the number of packets is configurable in most
       Traceroute implementations), each with an IP Time-To-Live (TTL)
   value
       of one to the destination. These packets expire as soon as they
   reach
       the first router in the path. That router responds by sending three
       ICMP Time Exceeded Messages to the Traceroute application.
   Traceroute
       now sends another three UDP packets, each with the TTL value of 2.
       These messages cause the second router to return ICMP messages. This
       process continues, with ever increasing values for the TTL field,
       until the packets actually reach the destination. Because no
       application listens to port 33434 at the destination, the
   destination
       returns ICMP Destination Unreachable Messages indicating an
       unreachable port. This event indicates to the Traceroute application
       that it is finished.  The Traceroute program displays the round-trip
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       Note that IP routing may be asymmetric. While Traceroute reveals the
       path between a source and destination, it may not reveal the reverse
       path.

       A few ICMP extensions ([ICMP-Ext], [ICMP-MP], [ICMP-Int]) have been
       defined in the context of Traceroute. These extensions augment the
       ICMP Destination Unreachable message, and can be used by Traceroute
       applications.

   3.2. Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)

   3.2.1. Overview

       While multiple OAM mechanisms have been defined for various
   protocols
       in the protocol stack, Bidirectional Forwarding Detection [BFD],
       defined by the IETF BFD working group, is a generic OAM mechanism
       that can be deployed over various encapsulating protocols, and in
       various medium types. The IETF has defined variants of the protocol
       for IP ([BFD-IP], [BFD-Multi]), for MPLS LSPs [BFD-LSP], and for
   PWE3
       [BFD-VCCV]. The usage of BFD in MPLS-TP is defined in [MPLS-TP-CC-
       CV].

       BFD includes two main OAM functions, using two types of BFD packets:
       BFD Control packets, and BFD Echo packets.

   3.2.2. BFD Control

       BFD supports a bidirectional continuity check, using BFD control
       packets, that are exchanged within a BFD session. BFD sessions
       operate in one of two modes:

       o Asynchronous mode (i.e. proactive): in this mode BFD control
          packets are sent periodically. When the receiver detects that no
          BFD control packet have been received during a predetermined
          period of time, a failure is detected.

       o Demand mode: in this mode, BFD control packets are sent on-demand.
          Upon need, a system initiates a series of BFD control packets to
          verify the liveness of the session. BFD control packets are sent
          independently in each direction.

       Each of the end-points of the monitored path maintains its own
       session identification, called a Discriminator, both of which are
       included in the BFD Control Packets that are exchanged between the
       end-points.  At the time of session establishment, the
   Discriminators
       are exchanged between the two-end points.  In addition, the
       transmission (and reception) rate is negotiated between the two end-


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       points, based on information included in the control packets.  These
       transmission rates may be renegotiated during the session.

       During normal operation of the session, i.e. no failures are
       detected, the BFD session is in the Up state.  If no BFD Control
       packets are received during a fixed period of time, called the


TOM: Fixed, pre-configured or negotiated period of time (i.e.: BFD interval)

       Detection Time, the session is declared to be Down. The detection
       time is a function of the negotiated transmission time, and a
       parameter called Detect Mult. Detect Mult determines the number of
       missing BFD Control packets that cause the session to be declared as
       Down. This parameter is included in the BFD Control packet.

   3.2.3. BFD Echo

       A BFD echo packet is sent to a peer system, and is looped back
   to the
       originator. The echo function can be used proactively, or on-demand.

       The BFD echo function has been defined in BFD for IPv4 and IPv6
       ([BFD-IP]), but is not used in BFD for MPLS LSPs, PWs, or in BFD for
       MPLS-TP.

   3.3. MPLS OAM

       The IETF MPLS working group has defined OAM for MPLS LSPs. The
       requirements and framework of this effort are defined in [MPLS-OAM-
       FW] and [MPLS-OAM], respectively. The corresponding OAM mechanism
       defined, in this context, is LSP Ping [LSP-Ping].

       LSP Ping is based on ICMP Ping and just like its predecessor may be
       used in one of two modes:

       o "Ping" mode: In this mode LSP ping is used for end-to-end
          connectivity verification between two LERs.

       o "Traceroute" mode: This mode is used for hop-by-hop fault
          isolation.

       LSP Ping extends the basic ICMP Ping operation (of data-plane
       connectivity verification) with functionality to verify data-plane
       vs. control-plane consistency for a Forwarding Equivalence Class
       (FEC) and also Maximum Transmission Unit (MTU) problems. The
       traceroute functionality may be used to isolate and localize the
   MPLS
       faults, using the Time-to-live (TTL) indicator to incrementally
       identify the sub-path of the LSP that is successfully traversed
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       It should be noted that LSP Ping supports unique identification of
       the LSP within an addressing domain. The identification is checked
       using the full FEC identification. LSP Ping is easily extensible to
       include additional information needed to support new functionality,
       by use of Type-Length-Value (TLV) constructs. The usage of TLVs is
       typically not easy to perform in hardware, and is thus typically
       handled by the control plane.

       LSP Ping supports both asynchronous, as well as, on-demand
       activation.

   3.4. MPLS-TP OAM

   3.4.1. Overview

       The MPLS working group is currently working on defining the OAM
       toolset that fulfills the requirements for MPLS-TP OAM. The full set
       of requirements for MPLS-TP OAM are defined in [MPLS-TP-OAM], and
       include both general requirements for the behavior of the OAM
       mechanisms and a set of operations that should be supported by the
       OAM toolset.  The set of mechanisms required are further elaborated
       in [TP-OAM-FW], which describes the general architecture of the OAM
       system as well as giving overviews of the functionality of the OAM
       toolset.

       Some of the basic requirements for the OAM toolset for MPLS-TP are:

       o MPLS-TP OAM must be able to support both an IP based and non-IP
          based environment. If the network is IP based, i.e. IP
   routing and
          forwarding are available, then the MPLS-TP OAM toolset should
   rely
          on the IP routing and forwarding capabilities. On the other hand,
          in environments where IP functionality is not available, the OAM
          tools must still be able to operate without dependence on IP
          forwarding and routing.

       o OAM packets and the user traffic are required to be congruent
          (i.e. OAM packets are transmitted in-band) and there is a need to
          differentiate OAM packets from user-plane ones. Inherent in this
          requirement is the principle that MPLS-TP OAM be independent of
          any existing control-plane, although it should not preclude
   use of
          the control-plane functionality.

   3.4.2. Generic Associated Channel

       In order to address the requirement for in-band transmission of
   MPLS-
       TP OAM traffic, MPLS-TP uses a Generic Associated Channel (G-ACh),
       defined in [G-ACh] for LSP-based OAM traffic. This mechanism is
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       on the same concepts as the PWE3 ACH and VCCV mechanisms.  However,
       to address the needs of LSPs as differentiated from PW, the
   following
       concepts were defined for [G-ACh]:

       o An Associated Channel Header (ACH), that uses a format similar to
          the PW Control Word, is a 4-byte header that is prepended to OAM
          packets.

       o A Generic Associated Label (GAL). The GAL is a reserved MPLS label
          value (13) that indicates that the packet is an ACH packet
   and the
          payload follows immediately after the label stack.

   3.4.3. MPLS-TP OAM Toolset

       To address the functionality that is required of the OAM
   toolset, the
       MPLS WG conducted an analysis of the existing IETF and ITU-T OAM
       mechanisms and their ability to fulfill the required functionality.
       The conclusions of this analysis are documented in [OAM-Analys]. The
       MPLS working group currently plans to use a mixture of OAM
   mechanisms
       that are based on various existing standards, and adapt them to the
       requirements of [MPLS-TP-OAM]. Some of the main building blocks of
       this solution are based on:

       o Bidirectional Forwarding Detection ([BFD], [BFD-LSP]) for
          proactive continuity check and connectivity verification.

       o LSP Ping as defined in [LSP-Ping] for on-demand connectivity
          verification.

       o New protocol packets, using G-ACH, to address different
          functionality.

       o Performance measurement protocols that are based on the
          functionality that is described in [ITU-T-Y1731].

       The following sub-sections describe the OAM tools defined for
   MPLS-TP
       as described in [TP-OAM-FW].

   3.4.3.1. Continuity Check and Connectivity Verification

       Continuity Check and Connectivity Verification are presented in
       Section 2.2.5. of this document.  As presented there, these
   tools may
       be used either proactively or on-demand.  When using these tools
       proactively, they are generally used in tandem.

       For MPLS-TP there are two distinct tools, the proactive tool is
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       [OnDemand-CV].Proactively [MPLS-TP-OAM] states that the function
       should allow the MEPs to monitor the liveness and connectivity of a
       transport path. In on-demand mode, this function should support
       monitoring between the MEPs and, in addition, between a MEP and MIP.
       [TP-OAM-FW] highlights,  when performing Connectivity Verification,
       the need for the CC-V messages to include unique identification of
       the MEG that is being monitored and the MEP that originated the
       message.

       The proactive tool [TP-CC-CV] is based on extensions to BFD (see
       Section 3.2. ) with the additional limitation that the transmission
       and receiving rates are based on configuration by the operator.  The
       on-demand tool [OnDemand-CV] is an adaptation of LSP Ping (see
       Section 3.3. ) for the required behavior of MPLS-TP.

   3.4.3.2. Route Tracing

       [MPLS-TP-OAM] defines that there is a need for functionality that
       would allow a path end-point to identify the intermediate and end-
       points of the path. This function would be used in on-demand mode.
       Normally, this path will be used for bidirectional PW, LSP, and
       sections, however, unidirectional paths may be supported only if a
       return path exists.  The tool for this is based on the LSP Ping (see
       Section 3.3. ) functionality and is described in [OnDemand-CV].

   3.4.3.3. Lock Instruct

       The Lock Instruct function [Lock-Loop] is used to notify a transport
       path end-point of an administrative need to disable the transport
       path.  This functionality will generally be used in conjunction with
       some intrusive OAM function, e.g. Performance measurement,
   Diagnostic
       testing, to minimize the side-effect on user data traffic.

   3.4.3.4. Lock Reporting

       Lock Reporting is a function used by an end-point of a path to
   report
       to its far-end end-point that a lock condition has been affected on
       the path.

   3.4.3.5. Alarm Reporting

       Alarm Reporting is a function used by an intermediate point of a
       path, that becomes aware of a fault on the path, to report to the
       end-points of the path. [TP-OAM-FW] states that this may occur as a
       result of a defect condition discovered at a server sub-layer. This
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       fault is cleared. The consequent action of this function is detailed
       in [TP-OAM-FW].

   3.4.3.6. Remote Defect Indication

       Remote Defect Indication (RDI) is used proactively by a path end-
       point to report to its peer end-point that a defect is detected on a
       bidirectional connection between them. [MPLS-TP-OAM] points out that
       this function may be applied to a unidirectional LSP only if there a
       return path exists.  [TP-OAM-FW] points out that this function is
       associated with the proactive CC-V function.

   3.4.3.7. Client Failure Indication

       Client Failure Indication (CFI) is defined in [MPLS-TP-OAM] to allow
       the propagation information from one edge of the network to the
       other. The information concerns a defect to a client, in the case
       that the client does not support alarm notification.

   3.4.3.8. Packet Loss Measurement (LM)

       Packet Loss Measurement is a function used to verify the quality of
       the service. This function indicates the ratio of packets that are
       not delivered out of all packets that are transmitted by the path
       source.

       There are two possible ways of determining this measurement:

       o Using OAM packets, it is possible to compute the statistics based
          on a series of OAM packets. This, however, has the
   disadvantage of
          being artificial, and may not be representative since part of the
          packet loss may be dependent upon packet sizes.


TOM: Not just packet sizes. Things like implementation (as I mentioned above with the comment about the accuracy or truthfulness of the data plane processing of OAM packets). Doing very accurate RTT as a simple example, with just IP Pings, is a tricky thing to make work. Also, it is important to mention that the scale in terms of number of packets, number of tests, etc... can and will impact these parameters too.


       o Sending delimiting messages for the start and end of a measurement
          period during which the source and sink of the path count the
          packets transmitted and received. After the end delimiter, the
          ratio would be calculated by the path OAM entity.

   3.4.3.9. Packet Delay Measurement (DM)

       Packet Delay Measurement is a function that is used to measure one-
       way or two-way delay of a packet transmission between a pair of the
       end-points of a path (PW, LSP, or Section). Where:






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       o One-way packet delay is the time elapsed from the start of
          transmission of the first bit of the packet by a source node
   until
          the reception of the last bit of that packet by the destination
          node.

       o Two-way packet delay is the time elapsed from the start of
          transmission of the first bit of the packet by a source node
   until
          the reception of the last bit of the loop-backed packet by the
          same source node, when the loopback is performed at the packet's
          destination node.

       Similarly to the packet loss measurement this could be performed in
       either of the two ways outlined above.

   3.5. PWE3 OAM

   3.5.1. PWE3 OAM using Virtual Circuit Connectivity Verification (VCCV)

       VCCV, as defined in [VCCV], provides a means for end-to-end fault
       detection and diagnostics tools to be extended for PWs
   (regardless of
       the underlying tunneling technology). The VCCV switching function
       provides a control channel associated with each PW (based on the PW
       Associated Channel Header (ACH) which is defined in [PW-ACH]), and
       allows transmitting the OAM packets in-band with PW data (using CC
       Type 1: In-band VCCV).

       VCCV currently supports the following OAM mechanisms: ICMP Ping, LSP
       Ping, and BFD. ICMP and LSP Ping are IP encapsulated before being
       sent over the PW ACH. BFD for VCCV [BFD-VCCV] supports two modes of
       encapsulation - either IP/UDP encapsulated (with IP/UDP header) or
       PW-ACH encapsulated (with no IP/UDP header) and provides support to
       signal the AC status. The use of the VCCV control channel provides
       the context, based on the MPLS-PW label, required to bind and
       bootstrap the BFD session to a particular pseudo wire (FEC),
       eliminating the need to exchange Discriminator values.

       VCCV consists of two components: (1) signaled component to
       communicate VCCV capabilities as part of VC label, and (2) switching
       component to cause the PW payload to be treated as a control packet.

       VCCV is not directly dependent upon the presence of a control plane.
       The VCCV capability negotiation may be performed as part of the PW
       signaling when LDP is used. In case of manual configuration of the
       PW, it is the responsibility of the operator to set consistent
       options at both ends.


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   3.5.2. PWE3 OAM using G-ACh

       As mentioned above, VCCV enables OAM for PWs by using a control
       channel for OAM packets. When PWs are used in MPLS-TP networks,
       rather than the control channels defined in VCCV, the G-ACh can be
       used as an alternative control channel. The usage of the G-ACh for
       PWs is defined in [PW-G-ACh].

   3.6. OWAMP and TWAMP

   3.6.1. Overview

       The IPPM working group in the IETF defines common criteria and
       metrics for measuring performance of IP traffic ([IPPM-FW]). Some of
       the key RFCs published by this working group have defined
   metrics for
       measuring connectivity [IPPM-Con], delay ([IPPM-1DM], [IPPM-2DM]),
       and packet loss [IPPM-1LM].

       Alternative protocols for performance measurement are defined, for
       example, in MPLS-TP OAM ([MPLS-LM-DM], [TP-LM-DM]), and in Ethernet
       OAM [ITU-T-Y1731].

       The IPPM working group has defined not only metrics for performance
       measurement, but also protocols that define how the measurement is
       carried out. The One-way Active Measurement Protocol [OWAMP] and the
       Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol [TWAMP] define a method and
       protocol for measuring delay and packet loss in IP networks.

       OWAMP [OWAMP] enables measurement of one-way characteristics of IP
       networks, such as one-way packet loss and one-way delay.  For its
       proper operation OWAMP requires accurate time of day setting at its
       end points.

       TWAMP [TWAMP] is a similar protocol that enables measurement of two-
       way (round trip) characteristics.  TWAMP does not require accurate
       time of day, and, furthermore, allows the use of a simple session
       reflector, making it an attractive alternative to OWAMP.

       OWAMP and TWAMP use two separate protocols: a Control plane
   protocol,
       and a Test plane protocol.

   3.6.2. Control and Test Protocols

       OWAMP and TWAMP control protocols run over TCP, while the test
       protocols run over UDP.  The purpose of the control protocols is to
       initiate, start, and stop test sessions, and for OWAMP to fetch
       results.  The test protocols introduce test packets (which contain


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       sequence numbers and timestamps) along the IP path under test
       according to a schedule, and record statistics of packet arrival.
       Multiple sessions may be simultaneously defined, each with a session
       identifier, and defining the number of packets to be sent, the
   amount
       of padding to be added (and thus the packet size), the start time,
       and the send schedule (which can be either a constant time between
       test packets or exponentially distributed pseudo-random). Statistics
       recorded conform to the relevant IPPM RFCs.

       OWAMP and TWAMP test traffic is designed with security in mind.
     Test
       packets are hard to detect because they are simply UDP streams
       between negotiated port numbers, with potentially nothing static in
       the packets.  OWAMP and TWAMP also include optional authentication
       and encryption for both control and test packets.

   3.6.3. OWAMP

       OWAMP defines the following logical roles: Session-Sender, Session-
       Receiver, Server, Control-Client, and Fetch-Client.  The Session-
       Sender originates test traffic that is received by the Session-
       Receiver.  The Server configures and manages the session, as well as
       returning the results.  The Control-Client initiates requests for
       test sessions, triggers their start, and may trigger their
       termination.  The Fetch-Client requests the results of a completed
       session.  Multiple roles may be combined in a single host - for
       example, one host may play the roles of Control-Client,
   Fetch-Client,
       and Session-Sender, and a second playing the roles of Server and
       Session-Receiver.

       In a typical OWAMP session the Control-Client establishes a TCP
       connection to port 861 of the Server, which responds with a server
       greeting message indicating supported security/integrity modes. The
       Control-Client responds with the chosen communications mode and the
       Server accepts the modes.  The Control-Client then requests and
   fully
       describes a test session to which the Server responds with its
       acceptance and supporting information.  More than one test session
       may be requested with additional messages.  The Control-Client then
       starts a test session and the Server acknowledges.  The Session-
       Sender then sends test packets with pseudorandom padding to the
       Session-Receiver until the session is complete or until the Control-
       client stops the session.  Once finished, the Fetch-Client sends a
       fetch request to the server, which responds with an acknowledgement
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   3.6.4. TWAMP

       TWAMP defines the following logical roles: session-sender, session-
       reflector, server, and control-client.  These are similar to the
       OWAMP roles, except that the Session-Reflector does not collect any
       packet information, and there is no need for a Fetch-Client.

       In a typical TWAMP session the Control-Client establishes a TCP
       connection to port 862 of the Server, and mode is negotiated as in
       OWAMP.  The Control-Client then requests sessions and starts them.
       The Session-Sender sends test packets with pseudorandom padding to
       the Session-Reflector which returns them with insertion of
       timestamps.

   3.7. Summary of OAM Functions

       Table 3 summarizes the OAM functions that are supported in each of
       the categories that were analyzed in this section.

     +-----------+-------+--------+--------+-----------+-------+--------+
       | Standard  |Continu|Connecti|Path    |Defect |Perform|Other   |
       |           |ity    |vity  |Discover|Indications|ance   |Function|
       |           |Check  |Verifica|y       | |Monitor|s       |
       |           |       |tion    |        | |ing    |        |
     +-----------+-------+--------+--------+-----------+-------+--------+
       |IP Ping    |       |Echo    |        |           |       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |IP         |       |        |Tracerou|           |       |        |
       |Traceroute |       |        |te      |           |       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |BFD        |BFD    |BFD     |        |           |       |        |
       |           |Control|Echo    |        |           |       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |MPLS OAM   |       |"Ping"  |"Tracero|           |       |        |
       |(LSP Ping) |       |mode    |ute"    |           |       |        |
       |           |       |        |mode    |           |       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |MPLS-TP    |CC     |CV/pro- |Route   |-Alarm |-LM    |-Diagnos|
       |OAM        |       |active  |Tracing | Reporting |-DM    | tic Tes|
       |           |       |or on-  |        |-Client    |       | t      |
       |           |       |demand  |        | Failure   |       |-Lock   |
       |           |       |        |        | Indication|       |        |
       |           |       |        |        |-Remote    |       |        |



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       |           |       |        |        | Defect    |       |        |
       |           |       |        |        | Indication|       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |PWE3 OAM   |BFD    |-BFD    |LSP-Ping|           |       |        |
       |           |       |-ICMP   |        |           |       |        |
       |           |       | Ping   |        |           |       |        |
       |           |       |-LSP-   |        |           |       |        |
       |           |       | Ping   |        |           |       |        |
       + --------- + ----- + ------ + ------ + --------- + ----- + ------ +
       |OWAMP and  |       |        |        | |-Delay |        |
       |TWAMP      |       |        |        |           | measur|        |
       |           |       |        |        |           | ement |        |
       |           |       |        |        | |-Packet|        |
       |           |       |        |        |           | loss  |        |
       |           |       |        |        |           | measur|        |
       |           |       |        |        |           | ement |        |
     +-----------+-------+--------+--------+-----------+-------+--------+
                         Table 3 Summary of OAM Functions

   4. Security Considerations

       This memo presents an overview of existing OAM mechanisms, and
       proposes no new OAM mechanisms. Therefore, this document introduces
       no security considerations. However, the OAM mechanism reviewed in
       this document can and do present security issues. The reader is
       encouraged to review the Security Considerations section of each
       document reference by this memo.

   5. IANA Considerations

       There are no new IANA considerations implied by this document.

   6. Acknowledgments

       The authors gratefully acknowledge Sasha Vainshtein, Carlos
       Pignataro, David Harrington, Dan Romascanu, Ron Bonica and other
       members of the OPSAWG mailing list for their helpful comments.

       This document was prepared using 2-Word-v2.0.template.dot.







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   7. References

   7.1. Normative References

       [LSP-Ping]    Kompella, K., Swallow, G., "Detecting Multi-Protocol
                     Label Switched (MPLS) Data Plane Failures", RFC 4379,
                     February 2006.

       [MPLS-OAM]    Nadeau, T., Morrow, M., Swallow, G., Allan, D.,
                     Matsushima, S., "Operations and Management (OAM)
                     Requirements for Multi-Protocol Label Switched (MPLS)
                     Networks", RFC 4377, February 2006.

       [MPLS-OAM-FW] Allan, D., Nadeau, T., "A Framework for Multi-Protocol
                     Label Switching (MPLS) Operations and Management
                     (OAM)", RFC 4378, February 2006.

       [OAM-Label]   Ohta, H., "Assignment of the 'OAM Alert Label' for
                     Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)
                     Operation and Maintenance (OAM) Functions", RFC 3429,
                     November 2002.

       [MPLS-TP-OAM] Vigoureux, M., Ward, D., Betts, M., "Requirements for
                     OAM in MPLS Transport Networks", RFC 5860, May 2010.

       [G-ACh]       Bocci, M., Vigoureux, M., Bryant, S., "MPLS Generic
                     Associated Channel", RFC 5586, June 2009.

       [VCCV]        Nadeau, T., Pignataro, C., "Pseudowire Virtual Circuit
                     Connectivity Verification (VCCV): A Control Channel
                     for Pseudowires", RFC 5085, December 2007.

       [PW-ACH]      Bryant, S., Swallow, G., Martini, L., McPherson, D.,
                     "Pseudowire Emulation Edge-to-Edge (PWE3) Control Word
                     for Use over an MPLS PSN", RFC 4385, February 2006.

       [ICMPv4]      Postel, J., "Internet Control Message Protocol",
   STD 5,
                     RFC 792, September 1981.

       [ICMPv6]      Conta, A., Deering, S., and M. Gupta, "Internet
   Control
                     Message Protocol (ICMPv6) for the Internet Protocol
                     Version 6 (IPv6) Specification", RFC 4443, March 2006.

       [MPLS-P2MP]   Yasukawa, S., Farrel, A., King, D., Nadeau, T.,
                     "Operations and Management (OAM) Requirements for
                     Point-to-Multipoint MPLS Networks", RFC 4687,
                     September 2006.


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       [ICMP-Ext]    Bonica, R., Gan, D., Tappan, D., Pignataro, C., "ICMP
                     Extensions for Multiprotocol Label Switching", RFC
                     4950, August 2007.

       [ICMP-MP]     Bonica, R., Gan, D., Tappan, D., Pignataro, C.,
                     "Extended ICMP to Support Multi-Part Messages", RFC
                     4884, April 2007.

       [ICMP-Int]    Atlas, A., Bonica, R., Pignataro, C., Shen, N.,
   Rivers,
                     JR., "Extending ICMP for Interface and Next-Hop
                     Identification", RFC 5837, April 2010.

       [TCPIP-Tools] Kessler, G., Shepard, S., "A Primer On Internet and
                     TCP/IP Tools and Utilities", RFC 2151, June 1997.

       [NetTools]    Stine, R., "FYI on a Network Management Tool Catalog:
                     Tools for Monitoring and Debugging TCP/IP Internets
                     and Interconnected Devices", RFC 1147, April 1990.

       [IPPM-FW]     Paxson, V., Almes, G., Mahdavi, J., and Mathis, M.,
                     "Framework for IP Performance Metrics", RFC 2330, May
                     1998.

       [IPPM-Con]    Mahdavi, J., Paxson, V., "IPPM Metrics for Measuring
                     Connectivity", RFC 2678, September 1999.

       [IPPM-1DM]    Almes, G., Kalidindi, S., Zekauskas, M., "A One-way
                     Delay Metric for IPPM", RFC 2679, September 1999.

       [IPPM-1LM]    Almes, G., Kalidindi, S., Zekauskas, M., "A One-way
                     Packet Loss Metric for IPPM", RFC 2680, September
                     1999.

       [IPPM-2DM]    Almes, G., Kalidindi, S., Zekauskas, M., "A Round-trip
                     Delay Metric for IPPM", RFC 2681, September 1999.

       [OWAMP]       Shalunov, S., Teitelbaum, B., Karp, A., Boote, J., and
                     Zekauskas, M., "A One-way Active Measurement Protocol
                     (OWAMP)", RFC 4656, September 2006.

       [TWAMP]       Hedayat, K., Krzanowski, R., Morton, A., Yum, K., and
                     Babiarz, J., "A Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol
                     (TWAMP)", RFC 5357, October 2008.

       [BFD]         Katz, D., Ward, D., "Bidirectional Forwarding
   Detection
                     (BFD)", RFC 5880, June 2010.



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       [BFD-IP]      Katz, D., Ward, D., "Bidirectional Forwarding
   Detection
                     (BFD) for IPv4 and IPv6 (Single Hop)", RFC 5881, June
                     2010.

       [BFD-Gen]     Katz, D., Ward, D., "Generic Application of
                     Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)", RFC 5882,
                     June 2010.

       [BFD-Multi]   Katz, D., Ward, D., "Bidirectional Forwarding
   Detection
                     (BFD) for Multihop Paths", RFC 5883, June 2010.

       [BFD-LSP]     Aggarwal, R., Kompella, K., Nadeau, T., and Swallow,
                     G., "Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) for MPLS
                     Label Switched Paths (LSPs)", RFC 5884, June 2010.

       [BFD-VCCV]    Nadeau, T., Pignataro, C., "Bidirectional Forwarding
                     Detection (BFD) for the Pseudowire Virtual Circuit
                     Connectivity Verification (VCCV)", RFC 5885, June
                     2010.

       [TP-OAM-FW]   Busi, I., Allan, D., "Operations, Administration and
                     Maintenance Framework for MPLS-based Transport
                     Networks ", RFC 6371, September 2011.

       [TP-CC-CV]    Allan, D., Swallow, G., Drake, J., "Proactive
                     Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check and Remote
                     Defect indication for MPLS Transport Profile", RFC
                     6428, November 2011.

       [OnDemand-CV] Gray, E., Bahadur, N., Boutros, S., Aggarwal, R. "MPLS
                     On-Demand Connectivity Verification and Route
                     Tracing", RFC 6426, November 2011.

       [MPLS-LM-DM]  Frost, D., Bryant, S., "Packet Loss and Delay
                     Measurement for MPLS Networks", RFC 6374, September
                     2011.

       [TP-LM-DM]    Frost, D., Bryant, S., "A Packet Loss and Delay
                     Measurement Profile for MPLS-Based Transport
                     Networks", RFC 6375, September 2011.

       [TP-Fault]    Swallow, G., Fulignoli, A., Vigoureux, M.,
   Boutros, S.,
                     "MPLS Fault Management Operations, Administration, and
                     Maintenance (OAM)", RFC 6427, November 2011.





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       [Lock-Loop]   Boutros, S., Sivabalan, S., Aggarwal, R., Vigoureux,
                     M., Dai, X., "MPLS Transport Profile Lock Instruct and
                     Loopback Functions", RFC 6435, November 2011.

       [ITU-T-CT]    Betts, M., "Allocation of a Generic Associated Channel
                     Type for ITU-T MPLS Transport Profile Operation,
                     Maintenance, and Administration (MPLS-TP OAM)", RFC
                     6671, November 2012.

       [PW-Map]      M. Aissaoui, P. Busschbach, L. Martini, M. Morrow, T.
                     Nadeau, "Pseudowire (PW) Operations, Administration,
                     and Maintenance (OAM) Message Mapping", RFC 6310, July
                     2011.

       [PW-G-ACh]    Li, H., Martini, L., He, J., Huang, F., "Using the
                     Generic Associated Channel Label for Pseudowire in the
                     MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP)", RFC 6423, November
                     2011.

   7.2. Informative References

       [OAM-Def]     Andersson, L., Van Helvoort, H., Bonica, R.,
   Romascanu,
                     D., Mansfield, S., "Guidelines for the use of the OAM
                     acronym in the IETF ", RFC 6291, June 2011.

       [OAM-Analys]  Sprecher, N., Fang, L., "An Overview of the OAM Tool
                     Set for  MPLS based Transport Networks", RFC 6669,
                     July 2012.

       [TP-Term]     Van Helvoort, H., Andersson, L., Sprecher, N., "A
                     Thesaurus for the Terminology used in Multiprotocol
                     Label Switching Transport Profile (MPLS-TP)
                     drafts/RFCs and ITU-T's Transport Network
                     Recommendations", work-in-progress, draft-ietf-mpls-
                     tp-rosetta-stone, July 2012.

       [IEEE802.1ag] IEEE 802.1Q, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan
                     area networks - Media Access Control (MAC) Bridges and
                     Virtual Bridged Local Area Networks", October 2012.

       [ITU-T-Y1731] ITU-T Recommendation G.8013/Y.1731, "OAM Functions and
                     Mechanisms for Ethernet-based Networks", July 2011.

       [ITU-T-Y1711] ITU-T Recommendation Y.1711, "Operation & Maintenance
                     mechanism for MPLS networks", February 2004.




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       [IEEE802.3ah] IEEE 802.3, "IEEE Standard for Information
   technology -
                     Local and metropolitan area networks - Carrier sense
                     multiple access with collision detection (CSMA/CD)
                     access method and physical layer specifications",
                     clause 57, December 2008.

       [ITU-T-G.806] ITU-T Recommendation G.806, "Characteristics of
                     transport equipment - Description methodology and
                     generic functionality", January 2009.

       [ITU-G8113.2] ITU-T Recommendation G.8113.2/Y.1372.2, "Operations,
                     administration and maintenance mechanisms for MPLS-TP
                     networks using the tools defined for MPLS", November
                     2012.

       [ITU-G8113.1] ITU-T Recommendation G.8113.1/Y.1372.1, "Operations,
                     Administration and Maintenance mechanism for MPLS-TP
                     in Packet Transport Network (PTN)", November 2012.



   Authors' Addresses

       Tal Mizrahi
       Marvell
       6 Hamada St.
       Yokneam, 20692
       Israel

       Email: talmi(_at_)marvell(_dot_)com


       Nurit Sprecher
       Nokia Siemens Networks
       3 Hanagar St. Neve Ne'eman B
       Hod Hasharon,   45241
       Israel

       Email: nurit(_dot_)sprecher(_at_)nsn(_dot_)com


       Elisa Bellagamba
       Ericsson
       6 Farogatan St.
       Stockholm,   164 40
       Sweden



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       Phone: +46 761440785
       Email: elisa(_dot_)bellagamba(_at_)ericsson(_dot_)com


       Yaacov Weingarten
       34 Hagefen St.
       Karnei Shomron,   4485500
       Israel

       Email: wyaacov(_at_)gmail(_dot_)com









draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview authors,

Here is my feedback on this document.

1.
Is this document in line with http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04?
* For example, the following definitions could be reused.
    Fault: The term Fault refers to an inability to perform a required
    action, e.g., an unsuccessful attempt to deliver a packet.

    Defect: The term Defect refers to an interruption in the normal
    operation, such that over a period of time no packets are delivered
    successfully.

    Failure: The term Failure refers to the termination of the required
    function over a longer period of time. Persistence of a defect for a
    period of time is interpreted as a failure.

* For example, on the basic abstract
Abstract

    Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) is a general term
    that refers to a toolset that can be used for fault detection and
    isolation, and for performance measurement. OAM mechanisms have been
    defined for various layers in the protocol stack, and are used with a
    variety of protocols.

Abstract (draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04)

    OAM (Operations, Administration and Maintenance) is a general term
    used to identify functions and toolsets to troubleshoot and monitor
    networks. This document presents, OAM Requirements applicable to
    TRILL.

So, as an example: does OAM include function?
I advice to review draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04

2.
draft-ietf-trill-oam is not mentioned, while the abstract mentions:
    This document presents an overview of the OAM mechanisms that have
    been defined and are currently being defined by the IETF.
Search for OAM in the current draft names (https://datatracker.ietf.org/), and 
you will find many references.
Ok, I see later on:     
    This document focuses on IETF
    documents that have been published as RFCs, while other ongoing OAM-
    related work is outside the scope.
Ok, fine then: we don't need a reference to all the drafts.
However, draft-ietf-trill-oam is closed to be a RFC, and should be mentioned.


3.
Section 1
    The term OAM in this document refers to Operations, Administration
    and Maintenance [OAM-Def  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#ref-OAM-Def>], 
focusing on the forwarding plane of OAM.
What does it mean "focusing on the forwarding plane of OAM"?
Do you take a subset of the definition for this document?
Btw, I don't see a definition in the terminology section.
In section 2.2.3
    A Maintenance Point (MP) is a functional entity that is defined at a
    node in the network, and either initiates or reacts to OAM messages.
Which plane is MP?

4.
Section 1, Introduction
"Hence, management aspects are outside the scope of this document."
I don't understand which management aspects we speak about here.
5.
Clarifying question regarding 1.2
If speak about OWAMP or TWAMP 'synthetic traffic), is that data plane, control plane, or management plane?
Note that I found later on in the draft:
    OWAMP and TWAMP use two separate protocols: a Control plane protocol,
    and a Test plane protocol.
Interestingly enough, after reading the document, I reviewed http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview/ballot/, and saw the same feedback from Stewart Bryant:

    Provide a clear view of OAM functionality and its relationship
    to various "planes" of networking (data plane, control plane,
    management plane). In particular, the importance of
    fate-sharing of OAM and user traffic flows in packet networks
    should be explained.

6.
I see a multiplication of "plane" terms in the IETF document, and in this 
document in particular.
I could find: forwarding plane, management plane, control plane, data plane, 
user plane, and test plane.
Way too many.
Please be consistent
7.
    Table 1 summarizes the IETF OAM related RFCs discussed in this
    document.

    Table 2 summarizes the OAM standards mentioned in this document.

You need to change the Table 2 description. Do you want to say something along 
the lines of:
    Table 2 summarizes the OAM standards specified by other Standard 
Development Organization
    (SDO) than the IETF, along with IETF references where applicable.


8.
Section 2.2.1
    For a formal definition of each term, refer to the references at the end of
    this document.
Without a reference to a specific RFC, this is the type of statement which is 
not useful: you have 5 pages of references.
You position this document as "An Overview of  Operations, Administration, and 
Maintenance (OAM) Mechanisms", but you tell the reader: "if you want to know about 
the terms,
just read first all references!"

9.
You specify some terms and some OAM categories,
    2.2.2  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#section-2.2.2>. OAM 
Maintenance Entities ..........................13  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#page-13>
          2.2.3  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#section-2.2.3>. OAM 
Maintenance Points ............................14  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#page-14>
          2.2.4  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#section-2.2.4>. 
Proactive and On-demand activation ................15  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#page-15>
          2.2.5  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#section-2.2.5>. 
Connectivity Verification and Continuity Checks ...15  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#page-15>
          2.2.6  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#section-2.2.6>. 
Failures ..........................................15  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#page-15>
... but you don't use them in the section 3

Just_one_example with section 3.2.2
-
    o Demand mode: in this mode, BFD control packets are sent on-demand.
       Upon need, a system initiates a series of BFD control packets to
       verify the liveness of the session
Instead of liveness, you have defined Connectivity Verification and Continuity 
Checks  in section 2.2.5
- OLD:
    Each of the end-points of the monitored path maintains its own
    session identification
NEW:
    Each of the MEP maintains its own session identification
OR NEW (actually I don't know)
    Each of the MP maintains its own session identification
- OLD
        A BFD echo packet is sent to a peer system
Peer system = MEP, MP, or something else?
- etc...

10.
This document is composed of a list of OAM content and references, but I'm really missing 
the document "scope and target audience".
When we did RFC 6632, which is the companion document, we 
hadhttp://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6632#section-1.1
The target audience of the document is, on the one hand, IETF working
    groups, which aim to select appropriate standard management protocols
    and data models to address their needs concerning network management.
    On the other hand, the document can be used as an overview and
    guideline by non-IETF Standards Development Organizations (SDOs)
    planning to use IETF management technologies and data models for the
    realization of management applications.  The document can also be
    used to initiate a discussion between the bodies with the goal to
    gather new requirements and to detect possible gaps.  Finally, this
    document is directed to all interested parties that seek to get an
    overview of the current set of the IETF network management protocols
    such as network administrators or newcomers to the IETF.

You should have something similar.


11.
Section 3.6.1, put the paragraph 2 at the end of the section. The "alternative" 
in the following sentence would then make sense
    Alternative protocols for performance measurement are defined, for
    example, in MPLS-TP OAM ([MPLS-LM-DM  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#ref-MPLS-LM-DM>], 
[TP-LM-DM  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#ref-TP-LM-DM>]), and in 
Ethernet
    OAM [ITU-T-Y1731  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08#ref-ITU-T-Y1731>].


My conclusions: this document still needs some work

Regards, Benoit
The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area
Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document:
- 'An Overview of Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM)
    Mechanisms'
   <draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08.txt> as Informational RFC

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org  mailing lists by 2013-01-25. Exceptionally, comments 
may be
sent toiesg(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org  instead. In either case, please retain the
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Abstract


    Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) is a general term
    that refers to a toolset that can be used for fault detection and
    isolation, and for performance measurement. OAM mechanisms have been
    defined for various layers in the protocol stack, and are used with a
    variety of protocols.

    This document presents an overview of the OAM mechanisms that have
    been defined and are currently being defined by the IETF.




The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview/ballot/


No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.