I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2013-3-25
IETF LC End Date: 2013-3-26
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
1. In table 1 the Transform ID are specified as TBD1 to TBD4. I
noticed that IANA have already assigned values 27-30. So they should be
specified. If not it will be good to ask the RFC editor before publication
to update the table. I saw that you only asked IANA to allocate values.
2. In the IANA section I did not understand to which table you are
referring to "For the new entries in the table of the Transform Type 4
repository, a reference to Section 2.3 of [IKE_DH_Req] shall be included in
the column named "Recipient Tests" indicating the required checks for the
other peer's Diffie-Hellman public keys."
Nits/editorial comments: