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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-04-19
IESG Telechat date: 2013-04-25
Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC. All of the comments
from my previous review of version 07 have been addressed. However, there
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
Note: The online IDNits tool appears to be broken today, so I was unable to
recheck this version.
There is a new section 12 added since version 07. If there is another revision
prior to approval, I suggest the authors make another pass at proofreading it.
If not, the errors are all of the sort that can be reasonably fixed by the RFC
editor. Some specifics:
-- paragraph 3, 1st sentence: "If one approach is to be deployed, it is the
operator's decision for the choice."
-- paragraph 4, 1st sentence: "... there requires some configurations."