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Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-07

2013-08-21 13:48:27
As per a suggestion in another thread: Would you also say that this draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard? This is more architectural overview than protocol per-se, but I do think it is necessary to the understanding of the other protocol documents (hence it is a normative reference), and I think it can progress with the rest.

(I haven't seen an objection to doing so in the other Last Call thread, so unless there is a good reason not to, I'm inclined to re-initiate the Last Call for Proposed Standard instead.)

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On 8/21/13 8:27 AM, Roni Even wrote:

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-repute-model-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013--8--20

IETF LC End Date: 2013-8--29

IESG Telechat date:

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

I was wondering why the "Further Discussion" section 9.3 is part of the security section. I think it should be a separate section.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3 the end of 2^nd paragraph "mechansisms" to "mechanisms"


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