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Ge-ART LC review of draft-ietf-nvo3-framework-06

2014-05-30 02:05:45
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-nvo3-framework-06

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014-5-30

IETF LC End Date: 2014-6-4

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

I think that the first sentence in section 1 is more in line with the title
of the document than the abstract. Propose to change the abstract to mention
Data Center.

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

1.      In section 1.2 ToR and EoR are given as example. Are these well
known or is there a need for reference?
2.      Section 4.1 title is Pros and Cons. My reading of the section is
that is more about "general issues and challenges of the overlay" as written
in section 4 above 4.1. Section 4.2 is about specific issues to consider.
3.      In section 5 "When an NVE receives data from a TS", this is the
first time the abbreviation appears in the document maybe just change to
Tennant System.

 

 

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