Hi,
A few comments:
This reads to me like a protocol specification and it was produced by
an IETF WG so I would expect it to be Standards Track rather than
Informational.
Wi-Fi is hyphenated. Please globally replaced "WiFi" with "Wi-Fi".
There seems to be an empty bullet point near the top of page 6.
"shall" -> MUST
Section 5: I think the usual IETF style would be to specify Length
after each diagram but, admittedly, that's pretty redundant in this
case...
References:
It seems to me that the references to the 3GPP document or
documents that specify these protocol blobs being added to EAP AKA and
EAP SIM, and probably most of the references to EAP, should be
Normative References.
I believe there should be a reference to IEEE Std 802.11-2012.
Thanks,
Donald
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On Tue, Jun 10, 2014 at 2:02 PM, The IESG <iesg-secretary(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org>
wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Network-Based Mobility
Extensions WG (netext) to consider the following document:
- 'EAP Attributes for WiFi - EPC Integration'
<draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes-08.txt> as Informational RFC
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Abstract
With WiFi emerging as a trusted access network for service providers,
it has become important to provide functions commonly available in 3G
and 4G networks in WiFi access networks as well. Such functions
include Access Point Name (APN) Selection, multiple Packet Data
Network (PDN) connections and seamless mobility between WiFi and
3G/4G networks.
The EAP/AKA (and EAP/AKA') protocol is required for mobile devices to
access the mobile Evolved Packet Core (EPC) via trusted WiFi
networks. This document defines a few new EAP attributes to enable
the above-mentioned functions in trusted WiFi access networks.
The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes/
IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes/ballot/
No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.