Hello Roni
I have made the changes and will post an updated version (version 08) later
today.
Thanks
Rajesh
From: Roni Even
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Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM
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Resent-Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.
Document: draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2015–2-10
IETF LC End Date: 2015–2-12
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
In section 1 “PBU” and “WLC” are mentioned but the full name appears later in
the document. Should be specified when first used.