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Document: draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-01
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2015-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-23
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major Concerns: None
Minor Concerns: None
Other Comments: Just one
The structure of Section 2 seems odd to me. I suggest this alternative:
2. Conventions Used in This Document
2.1. Key Word Definitions
The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
"SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
document are to be interpreted as described in [RFC2119].
2.2. Reverse Unidirectional LSPs Definition
Two reverse unidirectional LSPs are setup in the opposite directions
between a pair of source and destination nodes to form an associated
bidirectional LSP. A reverse unidirectional LSP originates on the
same node where the forward unidirectional LSP terminates, and it
terminates on the same node where the forward unidirectional LSP
originates.
2.3. Message Formats
This document uses the Routing Backus-Naur Form (RBNF) to define
message formats as defined in [RFC5511].