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Re: TSVDIR LC review: <draft-ietf-6man-resilient-rs-04.txt> (Packet loss resiliency for Router Solicitations) to Proposed Standard

2015-02-17 22:58:48
Hi Allison,
Thanks a lot for your review. I will update the reference for SOL_MAX_RT to RFC7083.

Thanks
Suresh

On 02/16/2015 05:39 PM, Allison Mankin wrote:
I am the assigned TSV Directorate reviewer for this draft.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-6man-resilient-rs-04.txt
Reviewer: Allison Mankin
Review Date: 2015-02-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-16
IESG Telechat date: N/A.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

This draft deals with the problem that packet loss of Router
Solicitations (RS)  can lead to an extended period of being disconnected
from the Internet.  The circumstances are well described and the
solution specified is sound from a transport point of view, and also it
has a track record. The draft directs hosts to use the retransmission
algorithm from RFC 3315, the DHCPv6 specification, which includes
backoffs and a randomization factor.  The draft specifies using this
algorithm with no maximum retransmission count (MRC) or maximum
retransmission duration (MRD) and shows that if there is an extended
cause for a router to not reply, there will be roughly one RS per hour
from each host.

Major issues:
None found

Minor issues:
The Maximum Retransmission Time (MRT) is set to a value of 3600 seconds
instead of a smaller value from RFC 3315.  The rationale is cited
normatively from an individual internet-draft from 2012 but the correct
reference (and the one that may be cited normatively) is RFC 7083.  I
find that the datatracker is missing a replaced-by that would have led
from the 2012 individual i-d through the WG i-d to the RFC.

On 2 February 2015 at 10:32, The IESG <iesg-secretary(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
<mailto:iesg-secretary(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org>> wrote:


    The IESG has received a request from the IPv6 Maintenance WG (6man) to
    consider the following document:
    - 'Packet loss resiliency for Router Solicitations'
       <draft-ietf-6man-resilient-rs-04.txt> as Proposed Standard

    The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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    Abstract


        When an interface on a host is initialized, the host transmits
    Router
        Solicitations in order to minimize the amount of time it needs to
        wait until the next unsolicited multicast Router Advertisement is
        received.  In certain scenarios, these router solicitations
        transmitted by the host might be lost.  This document specifies a
        mechanism for hosts to cope with the loss of the initial Router
        Solicitations.  Furthermore, on some links, unsolicited multicast
        Router Advertisements are never sent and the mechanism in this
        document is intended to work even in such scenarios.




    The file can be obtained via
    http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-resilient-rs/

    IESG discussion can be tracked via
    http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-resilient-rs/ballot/


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