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Document: draft-ietf-tls-session-hash-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2015-04-01
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-13
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major Concerns:
None
Minor Concerns:
The most recent RFC Editor style guide places normative and informative
references in top-level sections. In this document, the normative
references should be Section 9, and the informative references should
be in a new Section 10.
Other Comments:
For absolute clarity, I suggest a small addition to Section 5.1. It
says: "Thus, the entire encoding of the extension is 00 17 00 00."
I would add to the end of the sentence: "(in hexadecimal)".
Typo correction in Section 6.3: "sent by the server/". Please replace
the slash with a period.