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Document: draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-management-snapshot-03
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2015-6-14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-6-21
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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
I was wondering about the value of C, the document references RFC 5497
which says A protocol using this time representation MUST define the value
of C. Is there some recommendation here?
Nits/editorial comments:
In section 3.3 I am not sure what the following sentence in parentheses
means: (up to and including mechanisms involving depleted uranium)