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Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Sep-28-2015
IETF LC End Date: Sep-30-2015
IESG Telechat date: Sep-30-2015
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
RFC, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with
The draft discusses requirements that apply to the expedited setup of
GMPLS LSPs in scenarios that may have high churn. The text can be a bit
dense in the descriptive sections, but the requirements are easily
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Page 2, Section 1, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: delete the commas
following “setup” and “blocking”.
Page 3, 1st partial paragraph, 1st full sentence: change “set up” to
Page 3, 2nd full paragraph, 1st sentence: delete “intends to”. Change
“present” to “presents”.
Page 3, Section 2, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after
Page 3, Section 2, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete the comma after
Page 4, Section 3, item 2, 1st sentence: change the first “setup” to “set
Page 4, Section 3, item 2, 3rd sentence: delete “a” before “packet-only”.
Page 4, Section 3, 2nd paragraph after items, 2nd sentence: append a comma
Page 5, Section 4.1, 1st paragraph: change the space after performance to
Page 5, Section 4.1, 1st item: change “rate” to “rates” and both
occurrences of “request” to “requests”.
Page 6, Section 5, 3rd sentence: delete “be”.
Page 6, item R3: insert “the” before “number”.
Page 7, item R8: append a comma after “e.g.”.