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Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-12.txt> (Guidelines for Writing an IANA Considerations Section in RFCs) to Best Current Practice

2016-06-03 14:47:52
Would anyone object, and would this address your concern, Stephen, if
I should change the text like this:

OLD
   If information for registered items has been or is being moved to
   other documents, then, of course, the registration information should
   be changed to point to those other documents. In no case is it
   reasonable to leave documentation pointers to the obsoleted document
   for any registries or registered items that are still in current use.
NEW
   If information for registered items has been or is being moved to
   other documents, then the registration information should be changed
   to point to those other documents. In most cases, documentation
   references should not be left pointing to the obsoleted document
   for registries or registered items that are still in current use.
END

That is better, but I'm still worried that it'd be used by well meaning
folk to force authors to do more work than is needed for no real gain.

My preferred OLD/NEW would be:

OLD
   If information for registered items has been or is being moved to
   other documents, then, of course, the registration information should
   be changed to point to those other documents. In no case is it
   reasonable to leave documentation pointers to the obsoleted document
   for any registries or registered items that are still in current use.
NEW
   If information for registered items has been or is being moved to
   other documents, then the registration information should be changed
   to point to those other documents. Ensuring that registry entries
   point to the most recent document as their definition is encouraged
   but not necessary as the RFC series meta-data documents the relevant
   relationships (OBSOLETED by etc) so readers will not be misled.
END

Well, and *that* is so fluffy that I strongly object to it.  I think
it's bizarre to directly say that it's unnecessary and you don't need
to worry about it.  I can't think of any other place where we so
casually accept stale references.  For example, we flag I-Ds that
point to obsolete references and ask for justification to leave them
in... otherwise, they're updated before or by the RFC Editor (usually
before).

I think the change I've already proposed is a reasonable compromise.
"In most cases" isn't "in all cases".

Barry

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