Thank you, Ilari!
The changes look good and thanks for getting them posted.
Kathleen
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 9:43 AM, Ilari Liusvaara
<ilariliusvaara(_at_)welho(_dot_)com> wrote:
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 09:23:01AM -0400, Kathleen Moriarty wrote:
Ilari,
Thanks for your response. Could you propose text to address the last
question?
Thanks,
Kathleen
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 9:20 AM, Ilari Liusvaara
<ilariliusvaara(_at_)welho(_dot_)com> wrote:
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 02:21:27PM +0200, Jari Arkko wrote:
Thanks for your review, Roni!
Authors, did you observe the editorial suggestions?
Did the changes to Editor's Copy.
The comment about corner-cases I just deleted[1].
I'm not quite sure what question you mean. The changes due to editorial
suggestions?
Anyway, I grabbed the diff of the changes since -05:
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diff --git a/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml
b/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml
index a0dcf22..c737ac0 100644
--- a/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml
+++ b/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml
@@ -49,17 +49,16 @@
Diffie-Hellman algorithms ("X25519" and "X448"; <xref
target="RFC7748"/>) and
signature algorithms ("Ed25519" and "Ed448";
<xref target="I-D.irtf-cfrg-eddsa"/>) for asymmetric key
cryptography. This document
- defines how those algorithms are to be used in JOSE in interoperable
manner.</t>
+ defines how to use those algorithms in JOSE in interoperable
manner.</t>
- <t>This document defines the conventions to be used in the context of
+ <t>This document defines the conventions to use in the context of
<xref target="RFC7515" />, <xref target="RFC7516" />, and <xref
target="RFC7517" />.</t>
<t>While the CFRG also defined two pairs of isogenous elliptic curves
that underlie these
algorithms, these curves are not directly exposed, as the algorithms
laid on top are
- sufficient for the purposes of JOSE and are much easier to use.
(Trying to apply ECDSA
- to those curves leads to nasty corner-cases and produces odd
results.)</t>
+ sufficient for the purposes of JOSE and are much easier to use.</t>
- <t>All inputs to and outputs from the the ECDH and signature
functions are defined to
+ <t>All inputs to and outputs from the ECDH and signature functions
are defined to
be octet strings, with the exception of outputs of verification
functions, which are
booleans.</t>
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-Ilari
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Best regards,
Kathleen