Reviewer: Fernando Gont
Review result: Ready with Nits
** Technical **
* Section 3, pages 3-4:
Intended algorithm for mcpttq is queuing.
New Warning code: No.
New SIP response code: No.
Is this kind of thing really needed/required in the registry?
** Editorial **
* Section 1, page 2:
The third generation partnership project (3GPP)
May be you should capitalize these? (i.e., "Third Generation...")
* Section 1, page 2:
In addition to this a commercial PTT
service for non-professional use (e.g., groups of people on
holiday)
Please insert a comma after "this".
* Section 1, page 3:
MCPTT data transfer currently under development can
benefit from a queueing mechanism.
"data transfer..." protocols?
* Section 2, page 3:
The use of this namespace outside such network is
undefined.
s/network/networks/
* Section 5, page 5:
5. IANA Considerations
Abiding by the rules established within [RFC4412] and [RFC7134],
this
is an Informative RFC registering two new namespaces, their
associated priority-values, and intended algorithms.
s/registering/creating/ ?