Summary: Ready with nits.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments:
- S1: s/source of Media, such as from one or more Capture
Devices./source of Media from one or more Capture Devices./
- S1: s/SIP offer answer/SIP Offer/Answer model/
- S1: s/recommendations, for the CLUE architecture, about
how/recommendations for the CLUE architecture on how/
- S4: s/have main and slides video sources can/have a primary video
source and a slide video source can/
- S5: s/CaptureIDis/CaptureID is/
Thanks for your review, Vijay!
Authors, I didn’t see changes related to these observations
in the new document versions… were the comments missed?
While they were small editorial comments, they all made sense
to me at least ;-)
I have balloted no-objection for this document on tomorrow’s
IESG telechat.
Jari
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