Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-03-02
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:
Major issues:
Minor issues:
The wording of the behavioral requirements for signaling in
section 2.1 is atypical for IETF documents (and in my view makes it
harder for the reader to follow.) The rules are listed as separate
rules, but they are actually sequential steps that must be test in
order, exiting the process if the condition for each step is met. But
it does not actually say that.
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 2.3 refers to this as a proposal. It is a specification,
not a proposal. Please reword.