Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2017-03-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16
Summary:
Ready
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
While using MUST, SHOULD, and MAY as nouns and adjectives causes me a
twitch, this document is just fine. There's a typo in the first
paragraph of 1.2.