Thank you Roni for the review.
Yours,
Daniel
On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 6:57 AM, Roni Even
<ron(_dot_)even(_dot_)tlv(_at_)gmail(_dot_)com> wrote:
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-ecdh-new-curves-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-05-25
IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
In general it was easy to read and follow. Maybe it will be good to
repeat in section 3.2 the definition of KeyAgreeRecipientInfo . This
is done is section 2 for ECC-CMS-SharedInfo but it is not crucial.
1. There is no ToC
2. In section 2.2 fourth paragraph "is used two places" - "in two .."
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