4. Service Model
Although bits of Service Model description are in the document -- mostly the
Introduction -- the specification lacks a coherent description of its
operating framework and, instead, dives directly into normative detail, often
without providing an integrated view of the service.
To the extent that the above is not sufficiently clear:
The specification lacks any coherent summary of its functionality. It
needs text that provides a framework for its use and a summary of its
functionality.
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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
bbiw.net
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