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AD review comments on draft-degener-sieve-copy-01.txt

2004-01-25 09:00:57

I just reviewed this specification and I think it is quite close to being ready
for last call. My only comments are:

(1) An example showing the use of  the extentsion is needed. In particular,
    I've found that it really helps to have something that shows people what
    needs to be in the "reauire" clause.

(2) There needs to be an IANA considerations section telling IANA what
    to do. Something like this should appear as a section after the security

5 IANA Considerations
    The following template specifies the IANA registration of the copy Sieve
    extension specified in this document:
    To: iana(_at_)iana(_dot_)org
    Subject: Registration of new Sieve extension

    Capability name: copy
    Capability keyword: copy
    Capability arguments: N/A
    Standards Track/IESG-approved experimental RFC number: this RFC
    Person and email address to contact for further information:

      Jutta Degener
      Sendmail, Inc.
      6425 Christie Ave, 4th Floor
      Emeryville, CA 94608

      Email: jutta(_at_)sendmail(_dot_)com

    This information should be added to the list of sieve extensions
    given on
(3) IPR boilerplate is missing and needs to be added as a separate section
    just before the copyright:
Appendix B Intellectual Property Rights Statement

    The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any
    intellectual property or other rights that might be claimed to
    pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in
    this document or the extent to which any license under such rights
    might or might not be available; neither does it represent that it
    has made any effort to identify any such rights.  Information on the
    IETF's procedures with respect to rights in standards-track and
    standards-related documentation can be found in BCP-11.  Copies of
    claims of rights made available for publication and any assurances
    of licenses to be made available, or the result of an attempt made
    to obtain a general license or permission for the use of such
    proprietary rights by implementors or users of this specification
    can be obtained from the IETF Secretariat.

That's it. Jutta, if you can make these changes quickly that would be great, if
not I'll probably go ahead and get the last call started anyway and the update
can happen during the last call.


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