Thank you very much Tony.
I've added the additional figure and looking forward to receving
your other message.
Regards
Martin
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From: owner-ietf-openproxy(_at_)mail(_dot_)imc(_dot_)org
[mailto:owner-ietf-openproxy(_at_)mail(_dot_)imc(_dot_)org] On Behalf Of Tony
Hansen
Sent: Mittwoch, 6. Juli 2005 22:16
To: ietf-openproxy(_at_)imc(_dot_)org
Cc: Markus Hofmann
Subject: Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
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I did a thorough review of this version of the document and
really like it. It has a number of small nits that I'll
address in a separate email message (typos, etc.), but I
think that the basic document is fairly well structured,
succinct and clear.
The only semi-major change I'd consider making to it would be
to copy a version of Figure 2 (without the OCP callouts) into
the Brief Overview, after the paragraph "SMTP commands
are...". Figure 1 and Figure 2 as they are now have a lot of
differrences, and it would make it clearer when it gets to
the current Figure 2 exactly what OPES is adding to the mix.
As I said, I think this is a good document.
Tony Hansen
tony(_at_)att(_dot_)com
Internet-Drafts(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Open Pluggable Edge
Services Working Group of the IETF.
Title : OPES SMTP Use Cases
Author(s) : A. Barbir, M. Stecher
Filename : draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
Pages : 16
Date : 2005-7-6
The Open Pluggable Edge Services (OPES) framework is application
agnostic. Application specific adaptations extend that
framework.
This document describes OPES SMTP use cases and
deployment scenarios
in preparation for SMTP adaptation with OPES.
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