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RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-smime-x400transport-00.txt

2000-11-06 06:43:25
Hi,

Just a few comments on your draft.

1) "Expires in six months" is no longer acceptable. You have to put the
expiry date at the front and end of the draft, egg 2nd May 2001.

2) Section 1: Insert "the" between "in" and "Cryptographic".

3) Section 2.1, para 2: replace "which is" with "wants to be" to read "...
User Agent wants to be delivered to one or more recipients".

4) Section 2.3, id-ep-content: append "(2)" after "joint-iso-itu-t"

5) Section 2.4, last sentence: change to "Heterogeneous mail systems or
other factors MAY require the presence of this outer MIME wrapper".

Bill.