Comments on draft-park-seed-00.txt2004-03-02 23:34:59Issues: 1. The text and references to RFC 2119 can be removed as there are no protocol statements in this document. 2. Section 2, para last: L0, L1, R0, R1, Ki0, Ki1 are not used in the preceeding psudeo-code. Wordsmithing suggestions: These are optional, they just correspond to what I think might be better grammer. 1. Abstract s/adopted to most/adopted by most/ 2. Section 2, p1: s/64-bit subkeys Ki generated/64-bit subkey Ki generated/ Jim
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