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Comments on draft-park-seed-00.txt

2004-03-02 23:34:59

Issues:

1.  The text and references to RFC 2119 can be removed as there are no
protocol statements in this document.

2.  Section 2, para last: L0, L1, R0, R1, Ki0, Ki1 are not used in the
preceeding psudeo-code.

Wordsmithing suggestions:

These are optional, they just correspond to what I think might be better
grammer.

1. Abstract  s/adopted to most/adopted by most/

2. Section 2, p1:  s/64-bit subkeys Ki generated/64-bit subkey Ki generated/
 

Jim



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