"Susan" == Susan Thomson (sethomso) <sethomso(_at_)cisco(_dot_)com>
writes:
Susan> regard. For example, potential deployment scenarios may
Susan> include,but are not limited to, providing normal access
Drop the may include. You want to have at least one or two
deployments that you commit to solving to check your requirements
against.
You can have include but are not limited if you like.
Susan>
Susan> regardless of compliance with recommendations for
Susan> remediation ("advisory mode"), as well as providing
Susan> restricted access sufficient for remediation purposes and
Susan> any essential services until an endpoint is in compliance
Susan> ("mandatory mode").
I express no preference on whether or not the new or old text is
better. I just want to commit to at least one deployment.
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