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Re: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-mpls-te-scaling-analysis-03

2008-11-26 09:56:36
Oops, I messed up the Gen-ART review boilerplate. Please mentally insert the following text at the top of my review:

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

On Nov 25, 2008, at 5:29 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-te-scaling-analysis-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date:  2008-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-30
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Nits:

-- Don't forget the new IPR boilerplate.

-- Abstract, paragraph 3:

Section 8 talks about MP2P, so it is not strictly true that this document only considers P2P . (Repeated at end of introduction).

-- Section 2, 1st paragraph:

Please expand LSR on first mention.

-- Section 2.4, 2nd paragraph:

Please expand NMS and EMS on first mention.

-- Section 3.3, paragraph 2: "The consideration must be..."

Is there a word missing? I assume you don't mean "The consideration" to mean the _only_ consideration, since you mention others below.



















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