I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2011-4-11
IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-23
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
1. In section 8.5 and 8.6 the draft says that "If no more password
pre-processing techniques are supported the exchange MUST be terminated."
Reading section 6, I thought that NONE MUST be supported for
interoperability purpose.
2. In section 8.1 and in figure 1 and figure 2 is there a maximum value
for "counter"?
Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 1 just before 1.1 you have "suceed" instead of "succeed"
2. In section 4 third bullet "an" instead of "and"
3. In section 4.2 "Two elementx" instead of "Two elements"
4. In section 5 second row "authenticaiton" should be "authentication"
5. In section 6 fourth row "identitcal" instead of "identical"
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