There is one error that must be fixed, and several nits. Otherwise, WFM.
Marshall
There is a big typo in Section 2.1
The ISOC board of Trustees, the IAB, and the IAOC will appoint two
s/IAOC/IESG/
Nits
Section 1
an integrated perspective about their bodies work to the IAOC.
s/bodies/body's/
Section 2.2
s/Two member /Two members /
on 3 bulleted lines.
Section 2.3, title
2.3. IAOC membership
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s/IAOC/IETF Trust/
On Tue, Jul 26, 2011 at 8:52 AM, Olaf Kolkman <olaf(_at_)nlnetlabs(_dot_)nl>
wrote:
Dear Colleagues,
Based on the discussion I've updated the draft:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kolkman-iasa-ex-officio-membership
Essentially I incorporated Dave Crocker's proposal to
1) replace the 'chairs' by voting members appointed by the respective
bodies.
2) allow the chairs to participate in all meetings and provide
(unsolicited) advice.
I believe that allows chairs to exercise their responsibilities of keeping
a coherent perspective of the organization an allow them to steer outcomes
if needed, but doesn't require the day-to-day involvement that is required
from a diligent voting member.
--Olaf
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