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Document: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel(_dot_)a(_dot_)garcia(_at_)ericsson(_dot_)com>
Review Date: 2011-10-18
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-20
IESG Telechat date: 2011-10-20
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- Section 3.4 reads:
Section 2.1.1 of [RFC5322] limits lines to 998 characters and
recommends that the lines be restricted to only 78 characters. This
specification changes the former limit to 988 octets.
bbb ^^^
I wonder if there is an error in the third line and the text should say
"... limit to 998 octets" rather than "988". Otherwise, I can't explain
the 988 figure.
Idnits has a number of complaints:
Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
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-- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC5335,
but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
-- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC2045, but
the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
-- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC5322, but
the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
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** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational draft:
draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis (ref. 'I-D.ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis')
** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 5598
Other than that, the document looks good.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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